Talk:Mortal Coil (Star Trek: Voyager)

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Good article Mortal Coil (Star Trek: Voyager) was a nominee for Social sciences and society good article, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.

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[edit] Comments

Had to change some comments. First, to be precise, atheism is about the existence of deities, not the afterlife (beliefs about afterlife do not necessarily require a deity). I still find comment two's argument to be questionable, but decided not to totally delete it. 74.130.24.89 00:46, 6 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:ST-VOY Mortal Coil.jpg

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[edit] Reliable secondary sources

One of the complaints at the AfD discussion is that this article has no reliable secondary sources. I've found a few books at Amazon which could be used to fulfill this criterion, but I don't actually own any of them. However, I figured that someone here probably does. So, if anyone owns the Star Trek: Voyager Companion, Delta Quadrant: The Unofficial Guide to Voyager, or Star Trek: The Human Frontier, please find the places in those books which mention this episode and add citations (using {{cite book}}) accordingly. Thanks. —Josiah Rowe (talkcontribs) 08:41, 29 July 2007 (UTC)

Actually, I was able to add the Human Frontier citation just by using the "Search Inside" function at amazon. I may do the same for the other citations later, or someone else can do it. —Josiah Rowe (talkcontribs) 08:57, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
OK, I added the Star Trek: Voyager Companion citations, but Delta Quadrant isn't available through the "Search Inside" function. Does anyone own that book, or another episode guide which discusses and/or reviews this episode? —Josiah Rowe (talkcontribs) 18:35, 29 July 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Failing GA

This isn't a bad article per se, but it is lacking. Your refs look good, but there is almost no information on the episode's production and virtually none on reaction. Perhaps some episode guides might have opinions on the matter that could be added to Phillips's input. --Lenin and McCarthy | (Complain here) 19:36, 4 November 2007 (UTC)