Talk:Modernism (music)
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I made charles ives's name a link. May 15, 2006
- Thanks for being bold. Hyacinth 22:14, 7 August 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Modernism template
I've added a template feel free to add new articles to it. Stirling Newberry 00:32, 3 Jan 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Schwitters/Hausmann
The article was presenting a few askew views:
- One could think that "Ursonate: Rondo" was a poem by a later artist, who was influenced by Schwitters. -- I think a reference to "Ursonate" is more helpful, without going into detailed parts of it. And of course it must be unambiguously stated, that it is a work of Schwitters.
- Article said that "Ursonate: Rondo" was based on a single word: "fmsbwtözäu" -- Well, firstly Schwitters writes it "Fümms bö wö tää zää Uu" which is not a single word, and secondly he also draws from Hausmann's "pggiv" from the same poem and "qjyE" from another poem.
Hausmann's so-called "poster-poem" which influenced "Ursonate" could be found here (with more background here) at the time of this writing.
- Please Please sign your posts on talk pages per Wikipedia:Sign your posts on talk pages. Thanks!.
- Just because Schwitters used many words does not mean tha the did not develop or derive them from one. Your second argument contradicts Albright (2004), if I remember correctly, and some other source if I don't. Hyacinth 22:12, 7 August 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Reads like a Sixth-Form essay?
This article reads a bit like a sixth-form (high school?) essay to me, I'm afraid. Needs a serious rewrite.
[edit] Facts needed
Why are all the citations needed needed? Hyacinth (talk) 12:01, 12 January 2008 (UTC)