Talk:Modern primitive

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I feel that the third paragraph of this article deserves inspection, with an eye towards improved clarity and typography "Now how they have been they have been tweaked to work in this culture is new.", neutrality and verifiability "rituals may be done in groups of people or individually, but they are always knowledgeable about it and not trying something new until the research has been done", and cross referencing, (what is an Ibitoe?) I lack experience and motivation to do this myself at this time, and so refer it to the general editing community.