Talk:Mitsugi Saotome

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This article still sounds a bit too much like written by an adoring student with too little distance to his/her subject. / Habj 03:34, 27 December 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Edits Provided By Patty Saotome

Patty Saotome has provided some critical edits of the article. Shoshin Shrine Dojo has been struck and replaced with the correct Aiki Shrine Dojo. A few dates have been corrected along with a few other minor changes. --manji 07:22, 4 February 2006 (UTC)