User:Miranda/Ethiopia

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Kind of a peer review at this point. I asked Kaldari to remove the GA b/c the article had a couple of problems discussed below:

[edit] Comments

• Please avoid using "it" when a proper noun or a complex/common noun is available.
• Refs. which are not properly cited according to WP:CITE:

2, 5, 6, 8, 21, 24, 26, 40, 54-57, 59-61, 74-79, 81-82, 82 (has an error), 86-87, 92-93, 95-99, 100 (not cited right)

• Not fully reviewed article, yet. But, I see some problems by just glancing through the article. Kind of too many [citation needed] templates. Not good for a potential GA.