Talk:Mike Sherman/Comments

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I am not an expert on Mike Sherman (that's why I looked him up) but I believe there are certain inaccuracies here: There is a sub-heading in the article called "Giants Coach", but nothing under the subheading mentions Mike Sherman coaching any team by the name of "Giants". I initially changed the lowercase "g" in Giants to a capital one on instinct, but as I read on, nothing about any "Giants" team was mentioned, which led me to believe that the sub-heading was an error. Again, I'm not basing that assumption on the premise that I'm any kind of expert on Mike Sherman, only on the fact that the sub-heading was not related to the content that followed. There was also some other minor problems with the article, (for example, someone's name was inserted into the article in a way that caused the ensuing sentence to make no sense; I did not remove the name however, as I was unsure if the name in question was relevant to the article in some way, and perhaps just misplaced.)

I would say this article would be best cleaned up by someone with much more knowledge of Mike Sherman than myself.