Talk:Michael Merzenich
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[edit] Assessment
UCSF needs to be spelled out the first time, more wikilinks should be included to link to relevant topics. Also needs a proper WP:LEAD and could use an appropriate infobox. Aboutmovies (talk) 06:36, 8 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Arguments over therapies
The biography page is not appropriate for analysis of whether these therapies work, or not. The page is about the person referenced. If you want to add content to Wikipedia that consists of reliable third party sourced material about efficacy of Posit Science's product, please create a page on Posit Science's product. And be aware that all reliable third party material is highly desired, that material added should stick closely to the third party sources, and that the type of original research that you had added to this page is not what Wikipedia is about. If their product does not generalize to real life situations, AND there are third party references that state as much, you should include should material. If it is your own interpretation, that is original research (no matter how much of an expert you are). If you are an expert on this material, then it should be no problem to cite your own material published in reliable third party sources. There are a host of guidance pages that will help you edit appropriately at WP:BLP, WP:NOR, WP:RS, WP:V. Please also note that the Brain fitness page already has a section with some third party reliably-sourced material on brain fitness training products including the UFOV - which is now party of Posit Science's products. Happy editing, and please do not be dissuaded - material from reliable third party sources is highly desired - but Wikipedia is not the place to create new material - only to collect and refer to already published material. --Animalresearcher (talk) 19:38, 19 April 2008 (UTC)