Talk:Michael DiSalle/Comments

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This article is mostly well written until ¶6, which suddenly is garbled and doesn't even make sense. ¶7 is fine--then ¶¶ 8, 9 and 10 are full of amateurish grammar (as of this writing, 5/7/2008). I would prefer someone else make corrections, since I am not even certain that the facts are right in the cited paragraphs. The subject, Michael V. DiSalle, was a friend of my father's in the 1950s, but I was a child at the time and cannot verify all the details. Billcito (talk) 11:16, 7 May 2008 (UTC)