Talk:Michael Benjamin (New York Assemblyman)

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[edit] POV

This article, while informative, seems to read a little more like a promo biography than an encyclopedia article. I suggest either introducing more info so it isn't as much of a list of his achievements, or paring it down to the most important bits and perhaps editing the tone a bit to be more neutral. — Editor at Large^(speak) 11:52, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Unsourced

There are external links, but are these references? If they are they should be mentioned to be such or other references should be found. — Editor at Large^(speak) 11:52, 7 November 2006 (UTC)