Talk:Mercury Marine

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[edit] Vote for Deletion

This article survived a Vote for Deletion. The discussion can be found here. -Splash 20:48, 23 July 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Need for rewrite of "Today" section

This section is taken as is from a press release from mercury. It could be considered a copyvio considering only a single word was changed in certain paragraphs. Needs to be rewritten. Dread Specter 23:22, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

I think it was written by Mercury staff to advertise.--Pasbeat 19:52, 13 July 2007 (UTC)

Copy edit applied to move section away from advertising tone. Also away from text from brochures. May need more work. Please, review and edit as appropriate. Removed repeated references to Mercury Marine, removed semi-colons and replaced with commas. Removed JD Powers plug. Simplified Zeus and Verado sections. Simplified list of divisions of Mercury Marine. Please remove NPOV warning on consensus. William (Bill) Bean 17:30, 25 July 2007 (UTC)