Talk:Mensalão scandal
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[edit] POV dispute: Vote-for-cash X Off-book accounting
I've put a POV add in this article.
Most of the investigations and most of the proofs leads to irreguarities in off-book accounting in the electoral expenses (caixa dois de campanha), commited by PT, but also by other parties, like PTB, PSDB, PFL.
One: Few proofs on vote-for-cash were discovered and this article's description of the scheme is based almost on Jefferson's accusations. Most of the proofs presented in Brazilian press as mensalão-related can be interpreted as off-book-related. (PT donating money to PT to PT vote with PT. It's strange!) Until now, no deputy has gone to the press to testify the existence of it. Perhaps, the cash-for-vote existed, but it is not proved. At the same time, this article shows the existence of the scheme as clear and sure. Should we?
- Few proofs on vote-for-cash were discovered - It is false. The Parlamentary Comissitions of Investigation collect a great ammount of material supporting Jefferson's claims. Besides Jefferson there are several other witnesses: the secretary, two deputies, a minister, a governor, etc. [Carlosar]
- Yes, a very great ammount of material was collected by the C.I. and all of it leads to the existence of a complex off-book accounting, in which PT is involved. I repeat what I said above. Lots of these proofs indicates money recieved by pt-ists. PT donating money to PT to PT vote with PT. Don't you think it is strange? And more: what about the recievement of Valério's money by PSDB candidates in Minas Gerais? PSDB didn't recieved cash-for-vote, I think. It actually indicates Marcos Valério created a scheme to repass money from timids donators to the parties' off-book accounting. Furthermore, the proofs presented in this article - the coincidence in time of withdrawal and votes - is not conclusive. How many deputies can you buy with R$ 500,000? Just fifteen in more than five hundreds members of the Chamber. Think about it. José San Martin 19:10, August 14, 2005 (UTC)
Two: There's no mention on the off-book accounting scheme, which Marcos Valério was surely related to. There are lots of documents showing that MV donated/repassed off-book money for politicians. This is the main cause of the crisis.
- False. This is not the main cause of the crisis. The main cause of the crisis is the suspicion of payment to deputies by Executive. [Carlosar]
- Well, the crisis actually began when Jefferson's accusations on cash-for-vote. However, the main focus of the investigations led to the off-book accountings. José San Martin 19:10, August 14, 2005 (UTC)
Three: This article leads the reader to think PT was the only envolved in the scandal. Please, PT haven't invented corruption in Brazil. MV donations involved PT's electoral expenses, but also PSDB's (see Azeredo in Minas Gerais) and PTB's. There are more figures (and more PTists, too) that should be listed in involved in the scandal, starting by Marcos Valério.
- No, PT haven't invented corruption in Brazil, it is true. However it is the first time that a political party wants to buy the Legislative so the Executive can create Laws favouring it. This is new in Brazil! --Carlosar 03:41, 14 August 2005 (UTC)
- New? No, it older even than us. A less recent scandal. In 1997 Fernando Henrique Cardoso wanted to reelect himself. Passing an ammendment to permit reelection would be just immoral, if a scheme of vote-for-cash haven't be discovered. This scheme is being investigated by the current "Mensalão" Investigation Comission. José San Martin 19:10, August 14, 2005 (UTC)
Four: threatens to bring down of the government is a slightly dangerous statment that must be discussed in a separated topic. There some rumours on Impeatchment, but even his reelection is a possibility.
- It is not rumours. It is a real possibility!!! Read the newspapers. --Carlosar 03:41, 14 August 2005 (UTC)
- I agree! I agree! But I'm just saying this single and alone phrase can be misinterpreted. It must be covered in a exclusive topic. The sufficient to say that there are people that believe that the process of impeachment will have effect and people that think reelection is still a strong possibility. José San Martin 19:10, August 14, 2005 (UTC)
Five: that list of business involved should be better explained.
- Here you are right and I agree 100% with you. --Carlosar 03:41, 14 August 2005 (UTC)
- Wow, good. José San Martin 19:10, August 14, 2005 (UTC)
My personal comments: Unfortunately this case is not very well covered in English media, although it is a important matter. There are a lot of information, but in Portuguese. I suggest you do a research and find some good articles in English. --Carlosar 03:41, 14 August 2005 (UTC)
- I recommend to read [1] Carta Capital, edited by the famous Mino Carta. Here you can find (portuguese, only) another point of view of the crisis and much information that Veja don't publish. I don't think we can find some good material in English, unfortunately. Futhermore, Carta doesn't 19:10, August 14, 2005 (UTC)
- Carta Capital is a publication from Workers Party sympatizers, like you. I am not so fool.
And please! Remove the POV tag. The article is not pov.--Carlosar 03:41, 14 August 2005 (UTC)
- Since it's POV is in discussion, this article is POV. I'm sorry :) José San Martin 19:10, August 14, 2005 (UTC)
The article has been written in Portuguese, French, Esperanto, Italian and Spanish. And there is not a single pov mark in any one of these versions. Besides, the article is not been written by Brazilians only. Since the scandal has reach Portugal, the Portuguese people are contributing to the article and reading it. Thanks! --Carlosar 11:08, 14 August 2005 (UTC)
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José San Martin 23:44, August 13, 2005 (UTC)
- I agree with much of this... The sections about the members of other parties still need be translated and/or researched. And perhaps we should have a separate section about similar activities that may have been occuring long before. What exactly do you mean by the off-book accounting scheme? How does this make the article POV or not?
- Threatens to bring down the government... Well, "threatens" only implies a possibility and conveys the magnitude of the scandal to non-Brazilians. Many of the key government figures have already resigned and this possibility is certainly discussed in publications in Brazil and abroad. It may not be a pleasant recognition, but I think it is universally acknowledged as at least a possibility. We could soften the language however. Tfine80 23:58, 13 August 2005 (UTC)
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- Well, in these terms, I agree that it shall be keeped in the first paragraph, with these word, perhaps. But I keep thinking a topic relating ALL the possible Consequences is needed. José San Martin 19:10, August 14, 2005 (UTC)
- You are wasting your time. This guy is a Workers Party fanatic. He will no accept anything even if you show a truck full of evidences. [IP: 200.178.227.135]
- Don't be offensive, sire. I've got no more pacience for coup-lovers like you. You have just to present a single proof that can prove something. I've already said that the only proof is too weak to prove cash-for-vote. José San Martin 19:45, August 26, 2005 (UTC)
- If you were not a Brazilian I would give reason for you. But since you are a Brazilian and you have access to every news and article abou the crisis, I am very surprised with your claims and your argument that there are not proofs!
- Don't be offensive, sire. I've got no more pacience for coup-lovers like you. You have just to present a single proof that can prove something. I've already said that the only proof is too weak to prove cash-for-vote. José San Martin 19:45, August 26, 2005 (UTC)
- You are wasting your time. This guy is a Workers Party fanatic. He will no accept anything even if you show a truck full of evidences. [IP: 200.178.227.135]
- Well, in these terms, I agree that it shall be keeped in the first paragraph, with these word, perhaps. But I keep thinking a topic relating ALL the possible Consequences is needed. José San Martin 19:10, August 14, 2005 (UTC)
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- The Attorney-General of Brazil disagrees that there is no evidence of a "cash-for-votes" scheme. In fact, the Attorney-General last week formally indicted 40 people (including former ministers Dirceu and Gushiken, former Speaker of the House Cunha, and former PL/PTB party leaders Costa Neto and Jefferson) for embezzlement and misappropriation of public funds with the intent to influence key votes in Congress. Incidentally, I believe that information should be added to the Wikipedia article: we are no longer talking about partisan hearings in Congress, but rather actual criminal charges laid down against the suspected operators of the "mensalão" network. 17:10, April 13, 2006 (UTC).
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[edit] Sanmartin
I am afraid that the User:Sanmartin is "working" for the Workers Party... What you American and European think about it? [brazilian ip]
- Can't you shut up?! Who are YOU working for, then?! I'm a brazilian, from Campinas, São Paulo. I've no relationship with Worker's Party and I do not admit personal attacks! I'm just one of the Brazilians who does NOT support this white coup d'état that is being made by Brazilian Media: Veja, Folha de São Paulo, Globo, O Estado de São Paulo, Época, Istoé, which prefer histerical attacks than offer a clear sequence of the facts. See what happened in Venezuela, two years ago? Can you - in this talk page - present a single proof on Cash-for-Vote, instead of attacking me, please?! 15:49, August 28, 2005 (UTC)
I live in Campinas too. And I repeat what this other guy said. You are "working" for the Workers Party. Probably you are from Unicamp. You are living in another reality talking nonsense like coup d'état and a Brazilian media conspiration. International media is part of this "consipiration" too? Am I part of this conspiration? Is Wikimedia part of this conspiration? Socialist parties like P-SOL are part of this "conspiration"? There is a clear sequence of facts. You are the only one who is refusing to see.
Hey! What the other guys from Wikipedia say about this guy?
Ad hominem is forbidden on Wikipedia. You are free to disagree with Sanmartin's edits, but please keep the discussion based on the article. Starghost 18:20, 18 January 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Back to work
Ironically, the POV question is whether there is or not a POV question in this article. Let's back to work and remove it. And please, let us be more professional and avoid personal atacks.
Since it is a current event and it touches strongly what we thought about not only PT, but also about the government and - why not? - the future of this country.
First, I must say, what do I think about it. Obviously you realised that I am a PT supportes. Yet, I've got no 'official' relationship with it. I say that PT's scandal involves mainly off-book accounting, a common practice among our politicians. Personally I don't believe that cash-for-vote scheme existed, since the investigations have been searching all, except mensalão. Few proofs specifically on it were discovered (at the other hand, proofs on off-book accounting are abudant). Although the CPIs have not final conclusions yet, Comission of Ethics of Chamber concluded that mensalão has never existed. Well, I would ask you to post here everything that can be a proof. Don't think it as a personal challange, please.
And what am I proposing? Just include in this article the other point of view. Other accusations against other people, the off-book hipotesis, other proofs and a constest of the proof that it has. Also, the steet protests pro- and anti- Lula must be mentioned.
Hey, what do you think on it?
Thanks, José San Martin 20:59, September 4, 2005 (UTC)
I think that you a fanatic and that this article should be revised by other people besides you, a Workers Party fanatic. Look, you are claims are nonsense since people from left and even some Workers Party members already have admitted the payments for deputies, among other worst things. You are the only person that doesnt want to see.
- Stop offending me and make me see what you want me to see! Please, I want to know your point of view. How can you proof cash-for-vote? José San Martin 14:19, September 8, 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Sugestion
Maybe a mediator out of Brazil (who is not a Brazilian, and who is not for and against the Wokers Party) could resolve the disputes here. --Carlosar 12:49, 5 September 2005 (UTC)
I will try to put something following some suggestions of Sanmartim, if I get free time. --Carlosar 21:36, 9 September 2005 (UTC)
[edit] My opnion
I'm from Brazil, watching TV and reading newspaper everyday, and the article it's OK. Maybe because envolvement of Worker's Party the things are strong for us, Brazilians accustomed see PT talk about socialism/revolutionism, loving Cuba/Guevara and act without the minimum of responsibility (also the President) now with the subject is corruption. --Mateusc 20:48, 8 September 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Enough of the POV fights
I am NOT Brazilian and still don't know as many of the details as I should... I have worked a fair amount on this article and the articles of the associated figures involved, and I am tired of this fight over the POV tag. I think it is very important that this article is good and fair and we should not underestimate its importance and urgency. It has a very high Google rank for searches like "mensalão" and I would imagine many people around the world are reading these pages to understand what is happening in Brazil. San Martin, Carlos, Mateusc, let's all make a list of what needs to be done to the article to make it fair and complete. Please add to the list maybe in order of priority and sign your name.
- Clear language that everything is an allegation; in cases where there are disputes Tfine80 21:33, 8 September 2005 (UTC)
- I agree. José San Martin 22:01, September 9, 2005 (UTC)
- New section on "Evidence surrounding vote-for-cash allegation"... connected to timing section (does this need to expanded with new information?) Tfine80 21:33, 8 September 2005 (UTC)
- I agree José San Martin 22:01, September 9, 2005 (UTC)
- A section on the history of political corruption in brazil; maybe we need a separate article... i don't know. Tfine80 21:33, 8 September 2005 (UTC)
- A section on the issue of Lula's knowledge Tfine80 21:33, 8 September 2005 (UTC)
- Personally, I don't like this point. Vote-for-cash is still a supposition. Talking about Lula's knowledge we'll be doing nothing but supposing on suppositions. Not very encyclopedic, you know. It can be this article, however, we need not repeat "he is corrupt or he is a idiot". José San Martin 22:01, September 9, 2005 (UTC)
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- Maybe we should wait until this get investigated more in Congress... Is this an issue? Tfine80 23:20, 9 September 2005 (UTC)
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- Finish the section on the figures involved in the other parties Tfine80 21:33, 8 September 2005 (UTC)
- Envolved strictly on the vote-for-cash or also other accusations, like PT's off-book accouting, Azeredo's accounting, Severino's i-don't-know-what-on-earth, Universal's money and all these etc.? José San Martin 22:01, September 9, 2005 (UTC)
- Translation of the information on the various businesses involved from the pt wiki Tfine80 21:33, 8 September 2005 (UTC)
- The topic "the scandal's explosion" could be split in two topics, one just about the story and other, more objective, listing the accusations that had been made. Right? José San Martin 22:01, September 9, 2005 (UTC)
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- The irony, San Martin, is that now it mostly describes the history of the event. If we do it like this (which I am not opposed to) the POV battles may only get more intense. It will need to be constructed carefully. Tfine80 23:20, 9 September 2005 (UTC)
- I don't like the topic Principal business, since it is unclear and can be easly substituted by a list of the accusations. E.g., is Previ involved? Why? And Brasil Telecom, why is it not here? Daniel Dantas, the former president of BrT, is the main Valerio's source of money. I. e., can this list be comprehensive and clear? Couldn't some vitims be confused with the responsibles? José San Martin 22:01, September 9, 2005 (UTC)
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- I also think that it currently sort of slanders these businesses by insinuation. I don't think it is a problem as long as every business involved is listed and the allegations are explained. Tfine80 23:20, 9 September 2005 (UTC)
- Don't let us forget to put the results and parcial results of the investigations. José San Martin 22:01, September 9, 2005 (UTC)
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- Maybe we should have a list of the members of CPI and information about the reports and links to them. Tfine80 23:20, 9 September 2005 (UTC)
- And also I must say: why don't we rename of the article to 2005 Brazilian Political Crisis. Perhaps it can be more comprehensive, since there are more accusations in this crisis. José San Martin 22:01, September 9, 2005 (UTC)
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- This is a good idea, and I would support it if others agree. Vote-for-cash does imply certain things and the scandal is much more complicated. From bingo to the post office to now this restaurant thing. Tfine80 23:20, 9 September 2005 (UTC)
- I desagree. The main focus of this article is the Vote-for-cash scandal, and everybody says Vote-for-cash scandal, and the suject is better known as the Vote for cash scandal. --Carlosar 13:28, 13 September 2005 (UTC)
- Finally, there must be here the contests on these accusations. The defense must be here. José San Martin 22:01, September 9, 2005 (UTC)
Also, if anyone wants to add something to the article, but would prefer to write it in portuguese, make a subsection on your talk page, and I will help translate it with you. Tfine80 21:33, 8 September 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Collazzo deleted
Here I'm back again. I've deleted the following text:
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- Francisco Collazzos - Agent of international public relations for FARC. Arrested by Federal Police in August 24, 2005, accused of being in the country illegally. Documents in the archives of the Agência Brasileira de Inteligência (Abin) that Collazzos announced on Abril 13, 2002, during a party with key members of leftist parties at a house in Brasília, that FARC would give a five million dollar donation to Lula's Presidential campaign in 2002. The Agency claims that these documents are forgeries. A Commission of Investigation presided by the Workers' Party concluded on March 17, 2005 that the charge was empty. Colombia asked for the extradiction of Collazzos, but members of the PT, PSOL, PCdoB, and the PCB have opposed this.
There are few hits for Francisco Collazzos. However, Veja published this accusation, indeed. But it is excessive unrealiable, since it has not been proved and the proofs Veja claimed to have were qualified as "forgeries" by ABIN, that supposedly created the documents.
This paragraph can be kept, however. Just revert me, I don't mind. But I think it is just bad to Veja's and this article's reliability. José San Martin 18:13, 15 November 2005 (UTC)
I second the deletion. This specific accusation has died down, in addition to the Cuba one, it is in the category of "maybe once proven". --Dali-Llama 00:18, 16 November 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Cleanup needed
- This page is 74 kilobytes long. This may be longer than is preferable; see article size.
There is an exaustive cronology and several exaustive lists of people involved that are duplicated in their own entries. Wikipedia is not an indiscriminate collection of information, so, please, some cleanup is in order. I'll be adding some tags as a suggestion within the next hours. ≈ Ekevu talk contrib 17:31, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Who is citing who?
- I just returned from a couple of months in Brazil, where I read quite a bit of mensalão coverage. Indeed, the timeline presented here, it seems to me, closely follows the exhaustive timeline assembled by Veja -- whose Marcelo Tas then turns around and cites it as an instance of Internet irregulars telling the truth to power. I can't say that definitively, but I distinctly hear an echo chamber. I have not laid the two side by side, but I do thing it might a useful exercise.
The timeline presented here of what has appeared in the Brazilian press is impressively extensive, but its selection of sources is highly selective, first of all, and secondly it makes no attempt to independently assess the crediblity of any of it from original sources, such as publicly available documents from the legislature, the CPIs, federal police, fazenda, etc. It's a timeline of all the wild speculation, partisan ranting, fist-pumping sound-bites and political opera bufa that's been put out, leavened with leaks, incomplete official findings, and all sorts of other maracutaias. Item: The document rooms of the CPIs are not secured, for example, aside from a "members only" sign on the door, I recently read.
- In general, a key component missing from this article is the role of partisan media coverage, both pro and contra the PT government, and the influence of live television on the course of the CPIs. The preliminary report on the mensalão, for example, confined itself to the period 2002-2004, as mentioned, and did not conclude that the mensalão existed. It is not expected to reconvene. Part of the articles of impeachment against Roberto Jefferson was that none of his accusations had been verified, in fact. I read the document, will see if I can provide it.
- There is, as this article notes in passing, copious evidence that Marco Valério first mounted the scheme to launder caixa dois funds for the previous government. The former governor of Minas Gerais has been shown to have laundered copious funds for the PSDB's caixa dois through funding for sporting and cultural events provided by state and private enterpries. Lula once famously said that if campaign laws were enforced as written, the Chamber of Deputies would be emptied.That's true of the pizza issue now.
- Currrently, the PT is maneuvering to have a separate CPI mounted to look into the 1998-2002 chapter of the "Valerioduto", but parliamentary rules only allow for 5 CPIs at a time (or is it 7), and the agenda is crowded with inquiries into Bingos, Caixa Dois, the supposed "mensalão,^ the Post Office (CPI dos Correios), which have basically merged into a single inquiry into campaign finance irregularities.
- Any student of history knows that the Brazilian media is not and has never been a pristine and unblinking lens on the passing scene. For example, when we recently went to enter the password in our newsstand copy of Veja in order to enter the paid content section of the site, the password provided was NOVO LACERDA -- a reference to Carlos Lacerda, the media mogul and governor of Guanabara State who was an enthusiastic spokesman and propagandist for the anti-Jango movement that led to the "Revolution of 1964"--until the generals removed him from office. (The official entry on Lacerda cites a work by a certain Prof. Dulles that lionizes him as a "crusader," but that is not a universally held view.)
- That's a very in-your-face little in-joke about what the Editora Abril is up to. They, and Editora Tres, and Globo, and all the other closely-held media companies, are very much part of the cast of characters of this story--as are the caixa dois contributors, who have yet to be outed.
[edit] Dollars in the pants!
Someone here, as Brazilian, complain that José Adalberto Vieira da Silva dollars founded in their pants are the most symbolic Mensalão event being very explored by brazilian media and need a special section
- That's hardly encyclopedic, and not really emphasized since it happened. That is not the most symbolic Mensalão event--not yet anyways. If you feel otherwise, try to find references in the media recently to support a section about it.--Dali-Llama 20:04, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
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- José Simão referred to it this week. He said the episode was the "star of the mensalão." A.Z. 03:00, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Attorney-General's Decision to Indict Suspects
Last week, the Attorney-General of Brazil (Procurador-Geral) formally indicted 40 people (including former state ministers José Dirceu and Luiz Gushiken, former Speaker of the House João Paulo Cunha, and former PL/PTB party leaders Valdemar Costa Neto and Roberto Jefferson) for embezzlement and misappropriation of public funds with the intent to influence key votes in Congress and obtain and unfair advantage in electoral campaigns. That is an extremely relevant piece of information that should be added to the Wikipedia article. Note that we are no longer talking about allegedly partisan hearings in Congress, but rather actual criminal charges laid down against the suspected operators of the "mensalão" network (it's now up to the courts to decide whether they are guilty or not). 17:19, April 13, 2006 (UTC).
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- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.
The result of the proposal was No move (I suppose, eh). Duja► 09:28, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
- See Wikipedia:Requested moves#September 1, 2007 for the WP:RM entry.
- Since there's nothing else in the world called "mensalão" besides the subject of this article, I think it would be best that the title be just "Mensalão". The current title, "Mensalão scandal", is redundant. A.Z. 17:24, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
- Do not move. "Mensalão scandal" clearly means a scandal. "Mensalão" by itself could be a place or a man or a cookery dish or anything, until the reader has read the article, since many readers do not know Portuguese. Anthony Appleyard 11:10, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
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- There are a million articles whose title could mean a place or a man or a cookery dish or anything. I already gave the Perestroika example on that link above. It isn't called Perestroika reform. Do you think all titles should contain a short introduction to the subject? I don't speak English very well, so, for me, there are even more than one million articles whose name in itself means nothing for me, because they are words I don't know. I think it's not a good thing that the article called Joule be called Joule, the unit of energy, or the article about Glasnost be called Glasnost policy, or the article about coxinha be called coxinha snack, or the article about Catupiry be called Catupiry cheese, or the article about haze be called Haze atmospheric phenomenon. Those information can be in the introduction. The title should only be the name. A.Z. 17:57, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
- The Portuguese wiki reference is to "Escândalo do Mensalão" [2], thus wouldn't it be appropriate to parallel the original language citation? Although it is referred to elsewhere simply as Mensalão. Also, the term does have a literal meaning as "monthly allowance".SkierRMH 05:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
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- I thought the word was a neologism, but I found out it had a meaning before being used to name the scandal. However, it was an obscure word before 2005, as this page confirms. It says it's a way of collecting income tax and calls it a "tax jargon." I'm almost sure that it only came to mean "monthly allowance" after the scandal and because of it. However, I would need more references. A.Z. 06:46, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
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"O neologismo mensalão, popularizado pelo então deputado federal Roberto Jefferson em entrevista que deu ressonância nacional ao escândalo, é uma variante da palavra "mensalidade" usada para se referir a uma suposta "mesada" paga a deputados para votarem a favor de projetos de interesse do Poder Executivo. Segundo o deputado, o termo já era comum nos bastidores da política entre os parlamentares para designar essa prática ilegal.
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A palavra "mensalão" foi então adotada pela mídia para se referir ao caso. A primeira vez que a palavra foi grafada em um veículo de comunicação de grande reputação nacional ocorreu no jornal Folha de S.Paulo, na matéria do dia 6 de junho de 2005."
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"The neologism mensalão, popularized by then-congressman Roberto Jefferson in an interview that gave national notability to the scandal, is a variety of the word "mensalidade" used to referred to a supposed "mesada" payed to congressmen to vote in favor of projects of the Executive Branch interest. According to the congressman, the term was already common in the backstages of politics among congressmen to name that illegal practice.
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The word "mensalão" was then adopted by the media to refer to the case. The first time the word was used in a great national reputation communication vehicle it was in the newspaper Folha de S.Paula ... in June 6 2005."
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Appears that Wikipedia:Naming conventions (events) #1 would apply here, as the event is known as titled here.SkierRMH 06:50, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- I agree. No move should be done.--Dali-Llama 06:56, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
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- On the use of scandal: Haze is a bad example as Haze is an English word. Mensalão is not--therefore its use does not describe what it is--it would require a descriptor: scandal. Even in Portuguese, as was pointed out, mensalão itself is not the name of the event: it's the events surrounding it which describe the scandal. Watergate scandal, for example.--Dali-Llama 07:01, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
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- The only reason why the title is "Watergate scandal" is that there are a lot of things called Watergate. See for instance Grannygate, Fajitagate, Shawinigate, and Tunagate. Mensalão is way more common than "mensalão scandal" in Brazil, and it does describe the scandal. A.Z. 07:10, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- (sorry for the delay in replying--missed it on my watchlist) I think my issue with a move would be that Mensalão is the corruption practice--the tool they used, whereas Mensalão scandal refers to the controversy surrounding that particular instance of the practice. This argument would be helped, I admit, if there were other examples of "Mensalão" being used, but considering it's colloquial and not a proper name (IE: not "Watergate" or "Whitewater"), I figure it still characterizes a tool or action rather than a particular event (in the latter's case, it would warrant the page move).--Dali-Llama 21:21, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- The only reason why the title is "Watergate scandal" is that there are a lot of things called Watergate. See for instance Grannygate, Fajitagate, Shawinigate, and Tunagate. Mensalão is way more common than "mensalão scandal" in Brazil, and it does describe the scandal. A.Z. 07:10, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
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- I was not aware that there were any other instances of the practice. Could you elaborate? A.Z. 04:47, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
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- Oh that's what I meant-- I said my argument would be helped if there were other uses of the term "Mensalão"--but there aren't. The only other use is for the "Mensalinho", but that was after the original scandal. So while I admit there are ways to strengthen my rationale, I think my original argument still stands: we're talking about a tool or action, not a proper noun. It's like when you have an "influence peddling scandal", or a "nepotism scandal". In this case the term mensalão is a colloquialism for a cash-for-vote scandal. But again, that's just me--it'd be helpful to have others chime in.--Dali-Llama 05:02, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
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- I didn't know that mensalão was a colloquialism for a cash-for-vote scandal. I thought the word had been either created or had its meaning changed to describe this specific cash-for-vote scandal, the mensalão. I believe that, if a new scandal happens, people will call it "a new mensalão" or something like that, but in my view there was only one original mensalão. I think the word came to mean "monthly allowance" or "allowance" after the scandal, as a slang term, and any other meaning related to scandals and allowances would be derived from the first original meaning. A.Z. 05:10, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
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- I asked someone at work today what "mensalão" meant. She replied it was a word coined by Roberto Jefferson in 2005 to describe that specific cash-for-vote scheme that was going on . I asked whether the word existed before 2005, and she replied "no". I asked whether it was a general word meaning any "cash-for-vote" scandal, and she replied "no". Now, that's not a "reliable source", but I think that, if I continue asking people, they'll reply more or less the same thing. I used to think it was a neologism invented in 2005. A.Z. 02:55, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
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- Are you trying to say that the word mensalão means "cash-for-vote"? I understand that, if there were a nepotism scandal, it could be called "2005 nepotism scandal." If we wrote an article about that with the title "nepotism," that would make no sense. However, if someone invented a word for some nepotism scheme in 2005, and used that word to refer to that scandal, we could write an article with that title. A.Z. 03:05, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
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(unindent) I think that's my point AZ: it's taken up the meaning of cash-for-vote in Brazil. (whether it was known or not, I'd say probably not in public, but yes in the realm of politics as the quote you've provided demonstrates). So take, for example, Payola. When the practice first became known, I'm guessing you could've called it "The Payola scandal". But as time progressed, the actual act of paying for people to play a song became known as Payola--regardless of where or when it happened. My point is that the same has happened (and probably will happen again) with Mensalão. Take the Mensalinho, for example--also involved a regular payment in return for an illegal benefit (be it a congressional vote or a restaurant franchise). But I admit the latter example could've suffered from a bit of recentism.
I think at this point, if you'd like to move it to Mensalão, I wouldn't oppose it. If another scandal erupted which used the term, we'd probably have to move it again.--Dali-Llama 03:17, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- I see your argument. I guess we'll have to wait and see what happens as time progresses. If mensalão becomes just a common word for cash-for-vote, then this will be just the original scandal named mensalão, but not the only one. However, if indeed mensalão becomes a Portuguese word meaning cash-for-vote, wouldn't this article need to be named "2005 Brazilian Congress cash-for-vote scandal"? A.Z. 07:28, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, it would, which ironically enough was this article's first title.--Dali-Llama 14:23, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.
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The first line says the subject "dominated" politics. A.Z. 18:21, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
- AZ, honestly I appreciate the effort, but you have to stop tagging things and start fixing them. If you tag an article about one instance, the same amount of edits it would take for you to tag it, would be equal to removing the peacock term. If it's pervasive and requires a lot of effort, then I agree, use the tag. But one instance of the word you could've fixed it yourself.--Dali-Llama 19:11, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
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- I appreciate that you appreciate my effort, but I would need various referenced verifiable facts to appropriately substitute the sentence "The Mensalão scandal (...) dominated the politics of Brazil in 2005." I see that you simply removed the phrase "dominated the politics of Brazil in 2005", without making the effort to show that it dominated the politics of Brazil in 2005. Perhaps this was an improvement, perhaps someone else could have found a better way to solve the problem. A.Z. 19:53, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
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- The current sentence, "The Mensalão scandal (...) threatened to bring down the government of Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva," is vague; weasely; peacocky; telling, not showing; unencyclopedic; unverifiable in general; synthesis; and original research. A.Z. 19:58, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
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- I agree, this article outright sucks and needs a re-write.--Dali-Llama 21:48, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
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- As do most articles. Eventually someone will re-write them. A.Z. 22:40, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
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