Talk:Menogyn

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This article sounds like it's straight off a promotional website. See Wikipedia:NPOV for official policy, as well as What Wikipedia Is Not, which states:

Advertising - Articles about companies and products are fine if they are written in an objective and unbiased style. Furthermore, all article topics must be third-party verifiable, so articles about very small "garage" companies are not likely to be acceptable. External links to commercial organizations are acceptable if they can serve to identify major corporations associated with a topic (see finishing school for an example). Please note Wikipedia does not endorse any businesses and it does not set up affiliate programs. See also WP:CORP for a proposal on corporate notability.

Is Menogyn really large and significant enough to warrant a wiki article larger than, say, 3M, the University of Minnesota Duluth, or the Jet Propulsion Laboratory? I'd say in comparison the Menogyn article could be boiled down to about 2 moderate-length paragraphs on history of the camp and the current program. --BlueCanoe 00:21, 14 March 2006 (UTC)