User talk:McF530001/Teesside Fettlers

[edit] Some suggestions

1. What is the North East? Wikilinking is all well and good, but piping the term with text that makes sense to Yanks, Kiwis, Gujaratis, Iraqis, etc. would be useful.
2. Avoid peacock words about "beautiful countryside," "enjoyable experience" and the like. This is an impartial description, not an ad.
3. Don't capitalize terms like 'ceilidh' and 'banjo.'
4. Italicize album titles.
- 4a. Who released the albums? Are they self-produced? If not, what label were they on?
5. The article very badly needs links to impartial, reliable outside sources, not just to the band's website, members' websites, etc.