Talk:Maurice Sachs
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[edit] POV, etc
I've removed the following text (it's commented out in the article):
- But Sachs's true end was a lot less spectacular and romantic. In 1945, before the advance of British troops, the prison of Fuhlsbüttel was evacuated and its inmates moved to the city of Kiel. The evacuation consisted of a long march that took many days to complete. On the third day of the journey, April 14, 1945, at 11:00 in the morning, Sachs became too exhausted to continue the march. He was killed by a bullet through his neck, and his body was abandoned at the side of the road with the body of another "companion of the same misfortune." Said Emmanuel Pollaud-Dulian about Sachs, "He does not show much compassion for the Jewish people, and deplores their resignation, which seems to be the dominant feature of their character. On the countryside, when passing a herd of sheep, he sighs sadly saying, 'the Jews...' The drama he plays does not escape him. But, trapped in his state of amorality, Sachs does not believe in the existence of innocent victims."
First, I can't find a source for any of it - I don't see this "Emmanuel Pollaud-Dulian" anywhere. Second, it's pretty WP:POV. If anyone can rewrite it to make sense, I would appreciate it! -- SatyrTN (talk | contribs) 17:48, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
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