Talk:Matt Hardy/to do
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Combine information in the lead so that the paragraphs are a decent length. Change to better summarize overall career.Add years to the prose in some subsections, as it is unclear when the events are taking place (eg. the "Singles competition" subsection begins abruptly with "On the July edition of SmackDown!..." It would be nice to include a year, particularly for people who just click down to that section from the table of contents.Adding year ranges to section names might help the above point.Combine sentences in the "Personal life" section to form paragraphs.Perhaps trim the "Signature moves" section (that might just be my personal preference, though).There are three one-sentence paragraphs in the "Singles competition" subsection that should be combined with other paragraphs.The verb tense needs to be consistent. There are a lot of "He would go on...", "They would hold the belts...", etc. These should be "He went on...", "They held the belts...", etc.Unless they are complete sentences, photo captions should not end with a period (none of these captions are complete sentences).- References are needed for:
The end of the "The Hardy Boyz (1998-2001)" sectionThe end of the first paragraph in the "Singles career (2001-2005)" sectionThe second paragraph in the "Singles career (2001-2005)" sectionThe third paragraph in the "Singles career (2001-2005)" sectionThe second half of the fourth paragraph in the "Singles career (2001-2005)" sectionThe fifth paragraph in the "Singles career (2001-2005)" sectionThe end of the first paragraph in the "Release and independents (2005)" sectionThe end of the third paragraph in the "Release and independents (2005)" sectionThe final sentence in the "Singles competition (2007–present)" section (Hardy's return in Muncie, IN)Hardy's appearances on That '70s Show and Fear Factor in the "Personal life" sectionThe "Championships and accomplishments" section
Hardy wrestled for the WWF for about five years before he got a push. Something about this time needs to be mentioned.Is his time in the TWF worth adding? My bias against backyard wrestling says no, but it might be necessary in order to keep the article broad in coverage.From the beginning of the "Career" section, do we know what NEWA and NFWA are? If so, the abbreviations should be spelled out and the titles should be added to the "Championships and accomplishments" section.
