Talk:Market Street Commandos

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[edit] Rewrite

I did a rewrite to address the following issues:

• Outlaw Motorcycle Gang did not come into use until the 1980s and is a law enforcement designation. The Market Street Commandos were a motorcycle club, not a gang.

• The history of the POB splitting to form the HA is a detail that does not belong in the opening paragraph of the Market Street Commandos article. It's not that it's not true - it just isn't appropriate for the opening paragraph. This could be expanded upon later.

• The opening sentence needed to clearly define what, exactly, the Market Street Commandos are/were. The former opening sentence was quite muddled in that regard.

Mmoyer 02:38, 7 October 2007 (UTC)