Talk:Marisol Deluna

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Parts of the article read as if they were written by the subject's mother. Esp. the "early years". 24.47.151.201 (talk) 08:40, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

An effort is being made to add references and follow the guidelines of Wikipedia. There is little question as to her notability, rather I suspect an article that is a work in progress as you suggested. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.5.109.153 (talk) 18:17, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

Yes, the article is definitely a work in progress at the moment, but it has been improved substantially by myself and another user in the past couple of days. As the user above me has said, there is really no question as to notability, as I believe Ms. Deluna meets all of the guidelines for a biographical entry. There are some issues that still need to be worked out with this article, especially the "early years" section, as it does sound a little bit biased and motherly like. --Mr. Brown (talk) 22:08, 8 March 2008 (UTC)