Talk:Marine Corps Security Guard

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[edit] Template, NPOV, Sources

As of right now the second and third paragraphs of this article read like a recruiting advertisment and the only cited source for the entire article is the offical Battalion homepage, which also reads like the recruiting webpage that it is. This article needs to be cleaned up and cite its sources or have all hyperbole removed. NeoFreak 20:11, 18 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Article needs to be renamed...

They are not known as "Marine Corps Security Guards", they are known simply as "Marine Security Guards".

The title of the article is inaccurate.

Also, I edited out the part that said MSGs are provided with maids, etc. This is not true.

I removed some OR as well as some of the statements might be true some of the time they are not true all the time and there is no citation for the info. As for the name change I think it's fine as is because the term "Marine Security Guard" is a very generic term and in a global sense might encompass alot more things than just the MSGs. Also please sign your comments with four tildes. NeoFreak 18:10, 20 October 2006 (UTC)