Talk:Marcel Lefebvre
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[edit] Archbishop?
If Lefebvre is in fact excommunicate, should he still retain his title as Archbishop? Leave a message on my talk page to discuss.. --V. Joe 20:05, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
Lefebvre's title, 'Archbishop' was, at the time of his excommunication, an honorary one, attached to his person, not to an office. It was received at the time he was appointed Bishop of Tulle. He was the 'Archbishop-bishop' of Tulle. He had of course, been Archbishop of Dakar in his own right, but never referred to himself as such after his tensure there was over.So technically, it is title of honour and not attached to a particular jurisdiction. Excommunication deprives a cleric of an office. Since he did not possess or lay claim to an office at the time of his censure he did not lose the title which was purely personal and honorific.One might argue however, that upon being excommunicated (or perhaps even when he was suspended a divinis) he lost the titular Archdiocese of Synnada-in-Phrygia. This is arguable since a titular title is, by definition, also purely honorific. Confused? Yes, only the Roman Church can invent such legal niceties! Ex-Lefebvrite priest, 3-6-06
Excommunication (or suspension) of a cleric does not automatically deprive him of his office. (Deprivation of office is dealt with separately, in canon 1336.) What if the bishop of a see were to fall under excommunication not reserved to the Holy See for reasons other than defecting from the faith or from communion with the Church: when the excommunication is lifted, would the Pope have to be asked to reappoint him to his see?
If at the time of the illicit ordinations Lefebvre held the office of bishop of an active see, he would, I suppose, have lost that office because of canon 194 ("one who has publicly defected from ... from communion with the Church ... (is) removed from ecclesiastical office by virtue of the law itself." That removal from office and the automatic excommunication would, each of them individually, be effects of Lefebvre's schismatic act. Neither effect would be the cause of the other.
Of course, according to Catholic teaching about the sacramental character or seal, a bishop excommunicated and deprived of ecclesiastical office remains a bishop. The "arch-" part of "archbishop" does not designate an office, and so does not come under canon 194.
Lima 05:16, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
In a similar vein, should the post-nominal letters not be 'SSPX' rather than those of the Holy Ghost Fathers? Carolynparrishfan 04:42, 7 September 2006 (UTC)
Yes. The Society of Saint Pius X is not properly a religious order. The priests do not take vows. So they do not have the right to put SSPX after their names, as do proper religious like Dominicans and Franciscans.This was upheld by the Society's own Superior-General, Bernard Fellay, after some members adopted the practice. Lefebvre continued to live as a Holy Spirit Father until his death. I haven't been able to find out if the Order expelled him though. I'll get back to you on that.--Gazzster 06:18, 16 October 2006 (UTC)
Did he cease to be a member of the Congregation of the Holy Spirit (Holy Ghost Fathers)? Lima 07:45, 7 September 2006 (UTC)
- Lima, in answer to your question, while normally religious who become bishops are dealt with in canons 705 - 707 of the CIC 1983, in this case canon 694.1 would seem to apply -- ipso facto dismissal for abandoning the faith. The act creating the excommunication would itself cause dimissal from the community.DaveTroy 21:06, 26 February 2007 (UTC)
- Sorry, I doubt that this is exact. Canons on penalties are to be interpreted strictly (canon 18). So "faith" in canon 694 §1 must be interpreted strictly, and a schismatic act can be held to be not abandonment of the catholic faith, but only of fulness of communion. Lima 05:11, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
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- The specific canons in this case are, first: Canon 1013 "No bishop is permitted to consecrate anyone a bishop unless it is first evident that there is a pontifical mandate." In other words, you cannot consecrate a bishop unless the Pope gives his specific approval. Second, Canon 1382: "A bishop who consecrates someone a bishop without a pontifical mandate and the person who receives the consecration from him incur a latae sententiae excommunication reserved to the Apostolic See." This means that the act of consecrating a bishop without an OK from the Pope automatically excommunicates both the consecrating bishop and the person who was consecrated. Thus, the Pope did not excommunicate Lefebvre, Lefebvre excommunicated himself. Jhobson1 16:02, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
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Or rather, the law came into effect automatically, and John Paul II simply declared that the penalty had been incurred.The question is, however, I think, was he expelled from the Holy Spirit Fathers, either before his excommunication by the Holy Spirit Fathers themselves, or by the excommunication? I have no idea of the former, quite possibly the latter but we would have to consult some sort of authority.--Gazzster 06:51, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Removed text
I've removed the last two paragraphs as they fit on the SSPX entry, but not here:
- The Society claims that Catholics may attend its chapels "without worrying that they may be in schism by doing so".<ref>[http://www.geocities.com/Athens/Rhodes/3543/sdavies.htm Abp. Marcel Lefebvre and the Society of St. Pius X] by Michael Davies</ref><ref>[http://www.sspx.org/SSPX_FAQs/q12_sspxschismatic.htm QUESTION 12 Isn't the SOCIETY OF SAINT PIUS X schismatic?] from FREQUENTLY ASKED QUESTIONS about the Society of Saint Pius X, hosted by Society of Saint Pius XII in the United States of America</ref> The Holy See has, on several occasions, stated that such attendance is in normal circumstances "morally illicit" for Catholics, because the priests of the Society, being illicitly ordained, are by canon law automatically suspended from priestly functions, and because of the danger of imbibing schismatic ideas from them.<ref>[http://www.ewtn.com/library/CURIA/CEDSSPX.HTM STATUS OF SOCIETY OF ST PIUS X MASSES] by the Commission Ecclesia Dei</ref> <ref>[http://matt1618.freeyellow.com/schism.html Is the Society of St. Pius X in Schism? A Recent Response from Rome] by John Loughnan</ref> <ref>[http://www.ewtn.com/library/CURIA/CEDSSPX2.HTM STATUS OF THE SOCIETY OF ST. PIUS X] by Msgr Camille Perl, Pontifical Commission Ecclesia Dei</ref>
- The repeated declarations by the Holy See that the feelings of Catholics who find the traditional rites more fulfilling are to be respected demonstrate that it does not oppose attendance at the Tridentine Mass as such, but only celebrations by priests suspended by law and who, in some cases, teach that the Holy See has in practice abandoned the Catholic faith. Priests such as the members of the [[Priestly Fraternity of St. Peter]] who maintain full [[Communion (Christian)|communion]] with the Pope and the local bishops are given official authorization to celebrate the Tridentine Mass. The Society of St Pius X, on its part, disapproves of attendance at Mass celebrated by such priests, who declare their acceptance of all the decrees of the Second Vatican Council – which SSPX members cannot do.
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- I certainly concur. There is way too much in this article which is not specifically about Lefebvre but rather about the SSPX. Obviously there is an overlap, but .... Noel S McFerran 22:33, 22 August 2006 (UTC)
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- My opinion is that before his death anything to do with SSPX was to do with Lefebvre. It's only the stuff after his death where we need to employ a gimlet eye. JASpencer 22:40, 22 August 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] Consistory quote
The Consistory web page is in Latin, and there's no problem with that. However if using a foreign language source web page, there really should be a translation of the relevant areas. (See WP:RS). Could this be done as a quote?
If there's an English language source that would be prefered as WP:V states "English-language sources should be given whenever possible, and should always be used in preference to foreign-language sources, so that readers can easily verify that the source material has been used correctly."
JASpencer 07:28, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
- Thank you for the Latin quote. Is it possible to have a translation of this in English? WP:CITE says "If quoting from a different language source, an English translation should be given with the original-language quote beside it." That's why I'm reinserting the request quote template.JASpencer 12:02, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
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- I am not surprised that, while English translations of SSPX 1970s documents abound on the Internet, translations (though these will doubtless have appeared in print media of the time) of Holy See documents do not. The Church side is not the side that protests too much.
- After having Googled up so many quotations that the requester could have Googled himself, and that in some cases I felt were quite unnecessary, I do not feel inclined to undertake translation work also. When things finally settle down, I may perhaps be better disposed. Lima 15:33, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
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- In fact, I am giving myself an immediate rest from dealing even with these requests. Lima 20:30, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Removed text on Holy Ghost Fathers
I've removed the following text:
- Lefebvre first instituted a major reform of the seminaries run by the Holy Ghost Fathers. He transferred several professors whom he considered too liberal to non-educational posts. He ordered books by certain contemporary theologians, including [[Yves Congar]] and [[Chenu|Marie-Dominique Chenu]] to be removed from the seminary library, finding them too Neo-Modernistic.
It has the ring of truth about it but I can find nothing on the internet on this so I can't cite it.
JASpencer 20:47, 3 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] GA Passed
Congratulations on a well documented, clear, thorough, and neutral toned article! I've promoted the article to GA status. Next step would be a peer review. --CTSWyneken(talk) 18:25, 5 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Removing uncited material
I will be removing the following material in a couple of days if there are no citations:
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25 May 1929 he was ordained deacon by Cardinal Basilio Pompilj in the Basilica of St. John Lateran in Rome
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- I believe I have confirmed this from the French biography (with a different date). However my knowledge of speciality catholic terms is much worse than my knowledge of French. I need some help to cofrmed "ordained deacon" is what is meant by french in bold. "Le samedi Sitientes, 20 mars 1926, il reçoit, en la basilique Saint-Jean de Latran, des mains du cardinal Vicaire Basilio Pompilj, les deux premiers ordres mineurs de portier et de lecteur. --Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 23:44, 15 September 2006 (UTC)
- The boldfaced words say "the first two minor orders of porter and lector". See Minor orders in regard to understanding these as Catholic terms. The French word you would be looking for to mean "deacon" would probably be "diacre". --Metropolitan90 21:50, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
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- OK it looks like the minor orders are recieved before becoming deacon. With the discrepancy in date I suppose he could have gotten the minor orders and also been ordained deacon by the same guy and at the same place. I will look again for the correct citation. Thanks for the help --Birgitte§β ʈ [[User talk:BirgitteSB|<font Found it--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 15:21, 22 September 2006 (UTC)color="#778899">Talk]] 00:46, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
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Even before this, Lefebvre had already asked to be released for missionary duties as a member of the Holy Ghost Fathers. - 3
But the cardinal insisted that he consider this for a year while he engaged in parish work in the diocese of Lille. - 4
El Blakiyeh - 5 In his new position Lefebvre was responsible for the Catholic Church in the part of Senegal north of Gambia.
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- I feel this statement, while true, glosses over a change made in his title during WWII. I need to work on translating the whole section before I can clarify the article here. --Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 01:06, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
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- I could not easily find a citation for this. I did not read the entire book however I did spend as much time looking for this as it merits IMHO.--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 15:21, 22 September 2006 (UTC)
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- 7 the number of parishes
- 8 With this new responsibiity, it was appropriate that he have the title of archbishop
- 9 Pope Pius XII wanted to move quickly towards a proper hierarchy (dioceses with bishops, instead of vicariates and apostolic prefectures).
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- 11 Lefebvre was not among those made cardinal by John XXIII in December of that year. (The citation I want is about it's notability, not the fact itself).
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- The notability here is that he was expected to be amoung those nominated before the death of the previous pope. I will add something to this section shortly.
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- 12 and his ability to deal with the Roman Curia.
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- I don't know what the Roman Curia is, so I could not figure out which section of the book to look for this in.--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 15:21, 22 September 2006 (UTC)
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He would later say that it had become impossible for him to remain Superior of an Order which no longer wanted or listened to him. - 14
thereby officially dissolving the Society. - 15
In a sermon in June 1987 Lefebvre, now aged 81, announced his intention to consecrate a bishop to carry on his work after his death. - 16
Lefebvre came to the view that he was obliged to ordain a successor, if necesary without papal approval. - 17
Lefebvre declared that he had not withdrawn his submission to the Pope and that the crisis in the Church justified the consecrations - 18
although the Holy See rejects this argument as Lefebvre had been served with express canonical warnings - 19
from cancer
If these assertions don't have citations in two days I will start deleting them. If anyone wants me to hold off a particular assertion then please let me know.
I'll hold off if it's in an offline book, but only to give some time, not for ever.
JASpencer 09:03, 7 September 2006 (UTC)
I've given up the heavy thankless task of finding citations for JASpencer and do not intend to begin again; but I will ask whether he would accept "thereby officially dissolving the Society as a body recognized in canon law", or some such phrase? He probably would not, since he has asked for citations to justify many other seemingly obvious conclusions of the accepted statements in the text. On the other hand, I am surprised he hasn't asked for citations for so many statements under "Second Vatican Council" and elsewhere that, so far, have escaped. Lima 12:33, 7 September 2006 (UTC)
- I'm sorry if you think that getting to Good Article status is thankless. I don't, and I appreciate the work you've done. If you want to change the policy at WP:V go ahead and try, however this is not the place to do this.
- JASpencer 13:18, 7 September 2006 (UTC)
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- I most certainly do not want to change policy, and I do recognize that the way some implement policy may seem idiosyncratic to others. Lima 13:35, 7 September 2006 (UTC)
Please do not remove the sentences you have identified. You have totally misunderstood the Wikipedia policy on verifiability. The policy does not require that each individual phrase be supported by a particular footnote. It does not say that phrases which are not individually footnoted should be removed - although it does say that unsourced material may be challenged and removed. JASpencer has already removed a number of important facts from the article all of which come from Tissier de Mallerais' biography. There is NOTHING in Wikipedia:Verifiability which requires that these be individually footnoted. The footnotes which have been created are NOT the sources of this information; they are merely other webpages which say the same thing. In many cases the footnotes provided actually REDUCE the reliability of the information. The footnotes are often to anonymous undated non-scholarly webpages; in a few cases it's perfectly possible that they got their information from the Wikipedia article. This is NOT what verifiability is all about. I speak from experience as a librarian of almost twenty years experience who works at the largest and most prestigious university in Canada. Noel S McFerran 01:43, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
- Noel is absolutely right. Anyone interested may wish to skim through Wikipedia_talk:Verifiability in addition to carefully reviewing WP:V. A statement without a footnote is not necessarily unsourced. For example, if the material in an entire paragraph comes from one or two sources, then you only need a couple of footnotes for the paragraph - not one for each sentence. The same would apply to the entire article; if most of the information comes from just a few sources, then you may only need just a few footnotes. WP:V definitely does not say that every statement must be sourced. It does not even say that every fact must be sourced. dryguy 02:46, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
I am confused as to what is going on here. Where is this style of quote large amounts of the sources coming from? I have not yet come across this idea that not only should editors reference their sources but they should do the fact checking as well within the article. I know these sorts of ideas do not just appear out of the blue, so help me understand the roots of this movement by giving me some links please. I cannot comment much on this until I can claim to understand it. But it does strike me as ridiculous. Is this stuff actually disputed or contraversial? I just don't understand the overkill here. On the other hand it is being done in the proper way being brought up on the talk page and all. Also for the most part these things should appear in one of the sources. I just question if the resulting footnotes are really approriate. Do you realize the amount of fair use text you now have this page just from the Sermon on the occasion of the Episcopal Consecration? I worry if this trend continues we may enter copyright problems by reproducing such a large portion of the more concise sources. --Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 03:24, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
I note that a lot of the references here are to the same article repeated many times. In cases like this, I think it is appropriate not to have footnotes for it on every occurrence (and certainly not to quote the text that supports the point) but to simply give it as a general reference for the entire article. It helps improve the readability of the text. JulesH 06:15, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
- Fine, it looks like we need an RFC on this. JASpencer 10:56, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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- 1. In my opinion the above interpretations of WP:V are simply wrong. Unsourced facts can be challenged and removed. Facts which do not have a citation are unsourced. So it follows that uncited facts can be removed. So WP:V does say that every fact should be sourced. This is the subject of the RFC.
- 2. The citations that were inserted could be improved, I do not doubt that. However they were an improvement on what had gone before - which were no citations.
- 3. No matter what books were in people's heads, they were not in this article. Saying that you read any book before you wrote the article is nice, but it does not mean that the article meets WP:V. If you want to keep the fact insert the citation.
- 4. Quotes are simply best practice, so that a reader can do part of the fact checking within the article. They are not necesary for a citation, but they are not forbidden. In my opinion they make for a more reliable source. This is especially so for books, rather than websites. I don't think a big thing needs to be made about quotes.
- JASpencer 11:38, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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- 1. Unsourced fact may be challenged or removed. But the difference of opinion here is over which method to use. Obviously the less mainstream or more speculative (Foo believed . . .) the statement the closer we move toward removal. The more mundane {Foo was ordained on such a date) the statement the closer we lean towards leaving it challenged. Wikipedia is not a race it is a work in progesss, we can work on getting sources for things most likely to be correct.
- 2 & 3 I think the core problem here is how "citation" is being defined. Can everyone work here to provide links to the places were they gained thier ideas ideas about what a citation is?
- 4. I think quotes can be useful in the references in some cases. I think putting quotes in as much as possible is a bad idea. Use quotes when the information is surprising or contraversial or differs between sources. Please do not confuse referencing with fact checking. They are totally different processes. This is not actually allowing fact-checking because really someone just wrote the quote on a wiki so the quote itself requires fact-checking. Quotes do not make the source any more reliable than having references without quotes. And honestly I wonder if it makes people more likely to use an online source, which is a bad thing. We should be prefering books over webpages. This is not even broaching the copyright issue, which can come into play when a large percentage of a copyrighted text ends up being displayed in these quotes. Basically quotes can be a good things. However I think using quotes liberally provides very little to no benefit to the article and causes many problems. The biggest problem in this article is how you are you using non-authoratative websites just so you may copy out the quote, when the same information could be referenced from a much more reliable book resource. That trend is a huge problem in my eyes.
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- A WP requires articles to be referenced.
- B WP does not require fact checking.
- C Fact checking by one person (i.e. the person coping the quotes) is worse than useless, it is misleading.
- D The trend in this article to take items found in book listed as a reference and "cite" them from webpages makes the article less reliable than it was before the citations were added. (If this is not what happened correct me)
- E I question whether you are removing statements because they are actually unreferenced or because you are simply unable to fact check them. The former is per policy the latter is unacceptable. I don't know the answer to which description is more accurate. I think everyone here could really help by explaining what they believe the following terms mean. "unsourced material"; "uncited material"; what does it take for a statement to be considered "footnoted"; what does it mean for an article to be considered "reference"; what is an acceptable and unacceptable "citation". I think an RFC may be useful but not until after we have layed the ground and can understand what each other means when using the above terms. --Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 12:26, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
- I forgot to add that by having large amount of quoted material it makes it really hard to work in the edit window. In many places of this article there is more quoted material than articvle text between the quotes. This alone is a good reason to use quotes sparingly.--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 13:57, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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OK I have fixed some of the stuff above. I believe I can get citations for some of the remaining items next week when I return to the library and can spend more time translating. --Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 01:06, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
- I will be fixing all but two of the assertions left in the coming days. If anyone can get a hold of the english translation of Bernard Tissier de Mallerais's book I think there is much more of this article to be fleshed out. In the back is a Chronology of the main points (about 20) of Lefebvre's life, and some of these are not covered in the article. I am not personally interested in taking on the effort involved in actually writing from the French source I have access to. However if someone can find the english translation it is a very well sourced book with lots of information. It is not at all focused on the schism as I expected it to be. A whole article could be written from this book soley on the History of Catholiscim in Africa as well as the fleshing out of history portions of articles on many of the African dioceces. I imagine it has much to add to topics closer to the Vactican as well, though I did not read those sections. Anyways I will be done with what I can add to this article by
Monday.--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 15:21, 22 September 2006 (UTC)
Will be done by Thursday. --Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 02:39, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Request for Comment
Should unsourced items be removed at a granular level?
[edit] Position 1
The items in Talk:Marcel_Lefebvre#Removing_uncited_material should be removed unless citations can be found.
All items should be sourced. WP:V states that:
- Information on Wikipedia must be reliable and verifiable. Facts, viewpoints, theories, and arguments may only be included in articles if they have already been published by reliable and reputable sources. Articles should cite these sources whenever possible. Any unsourced material may be challenged and removed.
It also says:
- Editors should cite reliable sources so that their edits may be verified by readers and other editors.
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- The burden of evidence lies with the editors who have made an edit or wish an edit to remain. Editors should therefore provide references.
Thus any fact that is not sourced should be removed. This does not mean that a harmless fact or opinion should be removed immediately - but the process of tagging, announcing and then removing unsourced facts is more than adequate.
JASpencer 11:14, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
- I don't think anyone is disputing the process you are using. The actual complaint which brought me here has little to do with the above. It was that you are using unreliable sources and adding too many footnotes to the article. The above position is only justification for your removals which is only part of what is going on here. Also the above postion is heavy on quoted policy and light on how you are interpreting this policy. I would very much like to read three paragraghs of your thoughts on each paragraph of policy. Because I honestly am not sure what you mean when you say things like "any fact that is not sourced". We cannont have a real dialog until we are sure what the each person means by such things. --Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 12:41, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
- Are there biographical articles on other deceased persons where this interpretation of WP:V has been implemented, i.e. the removal of all sentences or phrases which do not have an individual footnotes? Noel S McFerran 13:35, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Position 2
The items in Talk:Marcel Lefebvre#Removing uncited material should not be removed. All of the "uncited material" comes from the definitive biography on Lefebvre which is noted in the "Further reading" section. It is not necessary to add citations for each and every phrase or sentence in the article.
The discussion on Wikipedia_talk:Verifiability makes it clear that it is not the intention of WP:V that each and every phrase or sentence be individually footnoted.
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It is not appropriate to footnote general statments of fact (e.g. footnote 1 - that Lefebvre was a Roman Catholic bishop). This is like footnoting the fact that Washington, D.C. is the capital of the United States or that Elvis Presley was a singer - and using as the "source" any other webpage which happens to make this statement.
It is not appropriate to footnote a statement based upon a synthesis of a variety of written sources (e.g. footnote 2 - that Lefebvre took the lead in opposing the reforms within the Catholic Church associated with the Second Vatican Council). The current footnote to this sentence cites a single journal article which talks about those who "have followed the lead given by the late Archbishop Marcel Lefebvre". That is not the source of the statement in the Wikipedia article; it is merely an article which includes similar words. The citation actually reduces the authority of the statement. Instead of being seen as the generally held opinion on the topic, the statement is now reduced to merely representing the view of one or two individual writers.
It is not the normal practice in scholarship to reproduce in a footnote the exact wording of the sentence in the source. This only needs to be done where the specific wording is significant.
Noel S McFerran 12:53, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
- I'm really not sure why if something is published in the biography it can't be cited as per normal. The book clearly meets the criterion in WP:RS If all the information is in the biography then there should be no problem. Cite it. If you can't lay your hands in the book then enter it in when you have the book. If it's not there, then it shouldn't go in.
- Similarly if you think that the book would be a better citation than an "unschorlarly" website then put this in, although if other things are equal I would count on the website as it is more easily verifiable - but that is a personal preference. Besides the issue is not whether a particular source is scholarly but if it is reliable. Articles in the Angelus about the SSPX are clearly reliable.
- As far as I can see not one of the unsourced statements is "common knowledge", apart from point 11 - although the citation I want is actually on whether this was notable. And I can't really see anything that changes the whole thrust of the article.
- JASpencer 16:27, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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- We normally use references, whether by citation or otherwise, to back up the content of the article. "Further reading" is generally for related material worth reading for general interest. If the definitive biography was a source, it should be in the references, and possibly also in the further reading. GRBerry 00:47, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
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- This position is dealing with too many things at once. Some of them, although important to the differences of opinion on this article, having nothing to do with the RFC question. I do not believe a book listed in Further Reading (or References for that matter) is good practice for souring edits. However I believe that most of the edits in question can be easisly converted to citation style (minus page numbers) and that I believe should be enough to prevent their removal. I don't believe citation style references neccessarily means putting a footnote on every assertion. Wikipedia:Footnotes reads: Place a ref tag at the end of the term, phrase, sentence, or paragraph to which the note refers. So if an entire paragraph is sourced from one book there would only be one footnote at the end of the paragraph. However places such as the lead will need a very high density of footnotes. Most of the article will probably fall somewhere in between. This is also something we can sort out with everyone's cooperation. --Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 02:06, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] Position 3
Should unsourced items be removed at a granular level? I dispute that most of the items in question (particularly Noel's detailed edits) are "unsourced." Noel has provided us with the source for these edits. Removing all of Noels edits at the granular level would result in several paragraphs of this article being lost. I believe that it is indisputable that article would lower in qualitly after such removals than it is now. I believe that the answer is to make citation-style footnotes for these edits minus the page numbers. So while I completely agree that unsourced edits shold be removed at all levels. I do not support all of the removals that are being proposed here as we know the source. Hopefully this can be resolved with Noel's assistance in a review of his eedits from six months ago. See Talk:Marcel Lefebvre#Noel's edits--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 02:21, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
- No one's proposing removing all Noel's edits, they are proposing removing the unsourced ones. All Noel's previous edits that have acceptable citations added later are being kept. There are seven sentences and seven phrases that are being proposed for removal. They can all be reinserted later when they have a citation. JASpencer 18:47, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
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- They are sourced and work is being to add citations. If Noel did all his contributions working from the same book, how can some be sourced and others not? Sourced means knowing where the information came from. It is true that some of the edits have been verified through websites which may or may not qualify as reliable, but the the source of all of the edits is what Noel was using.--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 19:49, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
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- Well looking at the edits that you've offered (and admittedly some of them do seem to be double entries) only points 6 to 11 are covered by the edits. As far as the others being sourced there are two statements "With this new responsibiity, it was appropriate that he have the title of archbishop" and "Lefebvre was not among those made cardinal by John XXIII in December of that year" (which I wanted notability - not the rather obvious fact). Now these are both interpretations, not facts. They could have been interpretations added in all good faith by the editor and not in the original book. They definately need seperate citations to keep in the article.
- So what you are saying is that we have three facts, of which one (the first indigineous bishop) is notable. I think the article can survive without it in the interim.
- JASpencer 20:19, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
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- How's showing an assertion (that all the disputed facts/opinions are from the 8 listed Noel McFerran edits) to be wrong doing anything in a hurry? I can't believe that people are so intent on keeping unreferenced facts in an article, especially when they can be re-entered. JASpencer 22:18, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
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- You have lost me. Where has anyone brought up this info is disputed? If you dispute the information is correct remove it. I have never understood that you are disputing any of this information before. I thought they were just the parts of the article which don't currently have a citation and you were working on getting everything up to standards. I personally never heard of Marcel Lefebvre and have no opinion as to what is contraversial or not within this article. So I will completely defer to you in that regard. I had not understood that the actual content of the edits where an issue. --Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 23:19, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] Algorithm for what to do with unsourced statements
Here's what I personally do in these cases.
- If you find an unsourced statement, do not remove it. Just find a source.
- If after researching it, you still can't find a source, still don't remove it-- put up the citation needed tag.
- If no citation is forthcoming, but you don't doubt the factual accuracy of the statement, then leave it be.
- If you have a statement that you suspect is actually untrue and which is unsourced-- THEN you can remove it.
Linked to this is the idea that "Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence". A claim that Lefebvre was ordained on May 25 (as opposed to May 26th) might be non-controversial and allowed to remain even if it's uncited. A claim that Lefebvre was responsible for the Kennedy Assassination, on the other hand, probably could removed on-sight without any further discussion.
Ultimately, the burden is definitely on people who want to have statements included-- if they want them in, it needs to be verifiable. All the same, don't remove something just because it's uncited-- remove it because it's untrue. --Alecmconroy 13:19, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
- So, for example, there's a New York Times article excerpted here that has the sentence "The French-born prelate died of cancer on March 25 at the age of 85, almost three years after being excommunicated for defying papal orders." But you have to pay to see the whole article, so I can't read the fulltext, and I haven't had any luck finding other cancer sources. But it does appeart to be true, so, I wouldn't remove that solely on the basis of it not being cited. --Alecmconroy 13:28, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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- Well I would cite that just as I would cite any other newspaper. It doesn't have to be on the internet to be cited. If it wasn't cited then remove it. We are building an encyclopedia not a scribbling pad. JASpencer 16:10, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] A specific example
Statement 5-10 in your list above are from this edit [1] by Noel S McFerran Noel stated on your talk page [2] that the source they were using is the biography list in "Further Reading". These statements are sourced. Now I hate to guess what you are thinking, but you haven't explained your thoughts as I have asked so I must speculate. I speculate that you will disagree that these statements are sourced. Please tell me if my speculation is correct and if it is please explain what you think something being "sourced" means. Because I believe it means that the statements came from a known reference that has been described in enough detail (in this case the ISBN) to let readers locate said reference and fact check the statements if they so wish.--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 18:06, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
- No, I do think that if something comes out of a book then it is sourced. However wikipedia articles are different to a magazine article (no matter how scholarly) in that it can be changed at any time by any one with any agenda. So if we are satisfied with a general declaration to "look at the book" at the end of the article we could have anyone adding anything afterwards with a general claim to look at the book. That's why WP:V exists, and that's why we should keep to it.
- I would also say that in a subject as controversial as Marcel Lefebvre that the article should stick more, not less, strictly to WP:V.
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- Ok I am still (more) confused. You believe these statements are sourced but are not satisified that they should stay in the article, correct? If we put a footnote(s) of "Tissier de Mallerais, Bernard, Marcel Lefebvre: The Biography (Kansas City, Mo.: Angelus Press, 2004), 338. ISBN: 1892331241". Would you be satisfied with that?--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 18:35, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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- If it had a page number for the claim, yes. JASpencer 18:55, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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- I have only seen policlies allowing the removal of unsourced material. Why do you believe sourced material without page numbers should be removed? --Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 18:59, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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- Because it can't be checked easily, see Wikipedia:Citing_sources#Page_numbers. Not one of these uncited assertions is covering any general description. JASpencer 19:19, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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- I agree is preferable to give page numbers. But the style guide you are linking does not avocate removing any material that does not conform to it's reccomendations. Is there any other prior experience or precedents you are drawing on in advocating the removal of sourced material without page numbers?
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- It says Page numbers must be included in a citation that accompanies a specific quotation from, or a paraphrase or reference to, a specific passage of a book or article. (my emphasis). I don't think that a citation that doesn't include a page number is really a citation. It's little more use than a general notice at the end of the page. JASpencer 19:40, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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- Thank you for the explanation. I would not have thought of the possibility that a citation only counts is if has a page number in such a case before this conversation. I have asked a question about this over at Wikipedia talk:Citing sources#Wikipedia:Citing_sources#Page_numbers. I am curious to find out if your interpretation is in line with consensus or if a significant number of people are interpreting this differently. I am reserving judgement until I can better understand everyone's arguments for and against this idea. Although I imagine it is obvious that I am currently thinking the idea is too restrictive.--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 19:58, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
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- I disagree with JASpencer. A citation without a page number may be sloppy and may not conform to WP:CITE, but it provides enough information to make the quote verifiable and is thus useful – just imprecise. Upon reading Wikipedia:Policies and guidelines it seems to me that any "must"s appearing in a guideline are to be taken with a grain of salt. Strange as it may seem, we find a lot of "should"s in our policies and "must"s in our guidelines… —mjb 23:44, 12 September 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] Noel's edits
The following edits were made by Noel during the period of Feb. 25 2006 to March 8 2006. [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10] Noel can you please look through these edits and confirm the source of this information. Any information you can give us about your method of contribuing during this time period might be helpful.--Birgitte§β ʈ Talk 22:14, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Declaration by Congregation for Bishops
The Congregation's declaration was published on L'Osservatore Romano of 3 July 1988. It was a declaration of a fact, not a trial of a person, and so had nothing to do with the canon Pmadrid cites. Even if Pmadrid's idea were correct, it is still an objective fact that the Congregation did declare Lefebvre excommunicated.
I translate here the text, as reproduced in Latin and in Italian translation in the 1988-1989 volume of Enchiridion Vaticanum - Documenti ufficiali della Santa Sede (Edizioni Dehoniane Bologna 1991 ISBN 88-10-80211-X), together with the notes that accompany it in that volume. The message from Cardinal Ratzinger that is quoted was in French.
The Most Reverend Marcel Lefebvre, Archbishop-Bishop Emeritus of Tulle has performed - in spite of the formal warning of 17 June last and the repeated contacts to get him to desist from his plan* - an act of schismatic nature, has consecrated four priests as bishops without papal mandate, and has thus incurred the penalty envisaged in canon 1364 § 1 and canon 1382 of the Code of Canon Law.**
I declare, with a view to all the juridical effects, that the aforementioned Archbishop Marcel Lefebvre, Bernard Fellay, Bernard Tissier de Mallerais, Richard Williamson, and Alfonso de Galarreta, have ipso facto incurred latae sententiae excommunication reserved to the Apostolic See.
I further declare that the Most Reverend Antonio de Castro Mayer, Bishop Emeritus of Campos, having participated directly as a co-consecrator in the liturgical celebration and having openly joined in the schismatic act, has incurred the latae sententiae excommunication envisaged in canon 1364 § 1.
Priests and faithful are warned not to support the schism of Monsignor Lefebvre, otherwise they would ipso facto incur the highly serious penalty of excommunication.
Congregation for Bishops, 1 July 1988
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- On 29 June Cardinal Joseph Ratzinger sent him the following telegram (Le Croix, 1.7.1988):
- "For the love of Christ and his Church, the Holy Father asks you paternally and firmly to depart today for Rome, without proceeding on 30 June with the episcopal ordinations that you have announced. He prays the Holy Apostles Peter and Paul to inspire you not to be false to the episcopacy that has been placed in your charge and the oaths you have taken to remain faithful to the Pope, the successor of Peter. He begs God to keep you from leading astray and scattering those whom Christ Jesus came to gather in unity. He entrusts you to the intercession of the Holy Virgin Mary, Mother of the Church."
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- At the same time (L'Osservatore Romano of 30.6-1.7.1988, p. 4), a communiqué removed all doubt about the seriousness of Lefebvre's gesture:
- The following specific statement is made in relation to rumours circulating in Archbishop Lefebvre's circles concerning the latae sententiae excommunication envisaged in canon 1382:
- In accordance with canon 1013, which states: "No bishop is permitted to consecrate anyone as bishop, unless it is first established that a papal mandate has been issued", the episcopal consecrations that have taken place on 30 June at the hands of Archbishop Lefebvre, in spite of the admonition of 17 June, were carried out expressly against the will of the Pope by an act that, according to canon 751, was formally schismatic, seeing that Archbishop Lefebvre has openly withdrawn submission to the Supreme Pontiff and from communion with the members of the Church subject to him
- In consequence, both Archbishop Lefebvre and the bishops whom he consecrated, Bernard Fellay, Bernard Tissier de Mallerais, Richard Williamson and Alfonso de Galarreta, have ipso facto incurred latae sententiae excommunication reserved to the Apostolic See. Furthermore, canon 1323 cannot apply for them, since in this case none of the legal situations envisaged in that canon has been established, seeing that even the alleged "necessity" has been deliberately created by Archbishop Lefebvre for the purpose of maintaining an attitude of separation from the Catholic Church, in spite of the offers of communion and the concessions granted by the Holy Father John Paul II.
Lima 07:07, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
- I'm not arguing that the congregation published such a statement. I think it's clear that they did. My argument is that, in regards to the declaration of an excommunication latae sententiae, only when the Pope declares that a bishop has incurred the penalty does the full penalty envisioned by the law go into effect. It is very clear in canon law that this is the case. I cite the following:
- Canon 1400. The object of a trial is: ... 2. The imposition or declaration of a penalty for delicts. (my emphasis)
- Canon 1401. By proper and exclusive right the Church adjudicates: ... 2. The violation of ecclesiastical laws and all those matters in which there is a question of sin, in what pertains to the determination of culpability and the imposition of ecclesiastical penalties.
- Canon 1405 §1. It is solely the right of the Roman Pontiff himself to judge in the cases mentioned in can. 1401: ... 3. legates of the Apostolic See and, in penal cases, bishops; (my emphasis)
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- Canon 1406 §2. In the cases mentioned in can. 1405, the incompetence of other judges is absolute. (my emphasis)
- Canon 1331 §1. An excommunicated person is forbidden:
- to have any ministerial participation in celebrating the sacrifice of the Eucharist or any other ceremonies of worship whatsoever;
- to celebrate the sacraments or sacramentals and to receive the sacraments;
- to exercise any ecclesiastical offices, ministries, or functions whatsoever or to place acts of governance.
- § 2. If the excommunication is imposed or declared, the offender:
- who wishes to act against the prescript of §1, n. 1 must be prevented from doing so, or the liturgical action must be stopped unless a grave cause precludes this;
- invalidly places acts of governance which are illicit according to the norm of §1, n. 3;
- is forbidden to benefit from privileges previously granted;
- cannot acquire validly a dignity, office, or other function in the Church;
- does not appropriate the benefits of a dignity, office, any function, or pension, which the offender has in the Church.
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- When the congregation gave that statement, it was a warning to Lefebvre that he incurred, in their opinion, the excommunication, and was thus, in their opinion, supposed to observe c. 1331 §1. Otherwise, if they were trying to make a juridical declaration of a latae sententiae excommunication of a bishop, they would have been absolutely incompetent under canon 1406. When the Pope declared Lefebvre excommunicated, by virtue of Canon 1405 §1 Lefebvre became additionaly liable to c. 1331 §2, since the excommunication was now juridically declared by the only competent forum.
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- In order to show that the congregation's declaration had the juridical effect of being a declaration of a latae sententiae censure, you must show that John Paul II explicitly delegated his authority over episcopal penal cases to the congregation or that there is a norm of the Holy See saying that the congregation has such authority. If you can, then I'll gladly yield, because that would make my argument moot in virtue of canon 1402. Otherwise, the only statement that had a juridical effect was Ecclesia Dei. Pmadrid 12:40, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
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- In any case, even if Pmadrid were right, it would only mean that the Congregation's declaration was invalid - but there is no disputing the fact that it was issued.
- The declaration was not a "warning". The Congregation had sent a warning on 17 June. It would make no sense to issue a "warning" on 1 July against what had already been done on 30 June. What the Congregation did on 1 July was to declare that, in view of the clear undisputed and indisputable fact that Lefebvre had ordained four bishops without papal mandate, he and the other five involved had automatically incurred excommunication, without any imposition of a penalty by a judge.
- By the way, I have difficulty in imagining what is meant by an "informal" written declaration by a Congregation. The document in question seems to have been issued with all the usual formalities. It was not an off-the-cuff remark by a member of the Congregation, but an official document of the Congregation itself.
- Further by the way, canon 1405, which reserves to the Pope judgement of bishops in penal cases, limits this reservation to cases covered by canon 1401, which speaks of determining guilt and imposing ecclesiastical penalties. Canon 1405 makes no reference to canon 1400, which speaks not only of imposing, but also of declaring penalties in regard to offences. Lima 16:00, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
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I want to cover the last objection first because I don't think that it is a proper reading. Canon 1405 does refer to 1400 and in two ways. Let's take a look: "It is solely the right of the Roman Pontiff to judge..." Judgement is a trial. Trial does not necessarily mean a formal process by which people are summoned and interrogated. This is the case most of the time because those officials who do the judging are bound by the law to do so; otherwise, their judgements are void. Without the law mandating that processes be followed, trial simply means determination/adjudication/figuring it out. The Roman Pontiff has clearly (c. 1406) reserved penal cases of bishops to his person. When he does take up such a case, he is not bound by any procedure. He's the Pope and is completely sovereign under canon law. He can observe any procedure that he sees fit. Thus, he does not need to call Lefebvre to defense. He can instead get his information from the congregation of bishops regarding this whole matter and his own personal appeal for him not to do this, and on that basis alone issue the only competent decree that will declare juridically the excommunication.
The second way that canon 1405 refers to canon 1400 is by specifically mentioning the "penal cases" of bishops being reserved to the Pope. Under canon law, anything referring to penal law and sanctions must be interpreted strictly (c. 18). The only method that canon law mentiones of imposing or declaring penal sanctions is through trial (c. 1400). It does mention two ways of trying penal cases: (1) by ecclesiastical courts and (2) in certain special instances, through administrative proceedings. Either way, interpreting strictly, since the only way mentioned of imposing penal law on a bishop is judgement by the Roman Pontiff, only the Pope has the right to invoke either procedure. Thus, any other person without the Pope's express permission cannot invoke penal law on a bishop through the power of the church.
The other objections are very good points, and I think I can explain the apparent dichotomy as well as offer a compromise on the language.
I certainly concede that using formal versus informal was a mistake on my part. The declaration of the congregation was certainly formal. I was trying to find proper language which explains the distinction in law that I am pointing out. The distinction can probably be best illustrated by these two questions:
- When was Abp. Lefebvre liable for c. 1331 §1?
- When was Abp. Lefebvre liable for c. 1331 §2?
Let's assume for the moment that Abp. Lefebvre did consecrate and did not have any defenses in regards to avoiding culpability. I don't want to argue that now, and it has no bearing on the point I am making. Assuming this, Question 1 is easy. He was liable immediately when he ordained. Thus the latae sententiae. Now, under c. 1331 §2, he is not liable for that section until the excommunication is imposed and declared. How is an excommunication imposed or declared? According to c. 1400, through a trial, with is either through administrative proceedings or through a court.
A few days later, the Congregation for Bishops, which is an administrative body, issued a signed declaration that the excommunication had been incurred. This could be when the excommunication was imposed or declared and when Abp. Lefebvre became liable under c. 1331 §2. It was an administrative proceeding, after all, one of the ways in which penal law can be applied. However, what stops this from happening is canon 1405 and canon 1406. 1405 reserves the penal cases of bishops to the person of the Roman Pontiff. If that wasn't clear enough, 1406 renders the competence of any other judge absolutely void. Thus, the congregation is absolutely incompetent to do so because only the Pope is able to do this.
So, why did the Congregation issue this decree when they knew that their statement would not invoke c. 1331 §2? There are a few reasons. When a congregation does not have the authority to issue a decree, the prefect will have an audience with the Pope and the Pope will approve their action. This is indicated in the text of the decree, generally before the signature. This probably was what was going to happen in this case as well, but because of the gravity of the matter the Holy Father probably decided to refrain from confirming and instead issued a personal statement. I know this is all speculation, but the fact of the matter is that there is no confirmation of the Pope in the decree, which means it does not have the juridical effect of declaring the excommunication.
I think this declaration did have a juridical effect though, just not the one contemplated under c. 1331 §2. This declaration made the excommunicable act notorious, and there are several canons which deal with such consequences. Thus, I was mistaken by saying the decree had no juridical effect; it just doesn't have the juridical effect of imposing or declaring a censure reserved to the person of the Pope.
In regards to the bishops that excommunicated themselves in the 70s, it is important to note that penal law was different in the 70s than it was after the 1982 code. All penal law was invalidated when the new code was issued (c. 6), so penal law in the 70s might have allowed the congregation to issue such declarations. I don't know about 70s penal law, so I couldn't say whether the 70s case is similar to this case or is instead similar to Milingo's.
This distinction is actually very important in regards to the Milingo case. The Holy See has issued a press release that Milingo has incurred excommunication latae sententiae. So, is Milingo liable under c. 1331 §2? No, because (1) it was not a decree and (2) even if it was a decree, the Pope neither issued it nor confirmed it. Does it make the excommunicable act notorious? Most certainly.
I think a good compromise would be to say that the congregation formally declared the excommunication but that it was John Paul II's letter that made it juridical fact and thus made Lefebvre liable under c. 1331 §2, or something similar to this. Pmadrid 20:35, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
- That "it was John Paul II's letter that made it a juridical fact" is in dispute. That the Congregation issued a declaration stating that Lefebvre had already been excommunicated by law on the previous day is, if I understand Pmadrid rightly, no longer in dispute. Raising the question of canon 1331 § 2 (mentioned neither in the Congregation's declaration nor in the Pope's motu proprio) is unnecessarily complicated. Instead of trying to going into all these matters that Pmadrid wishes to raise, would it not be better to return the text to how it was before his editing, so that it speaks in NPOV form only of the Holy See, a term that covers both Pope and Congregation? Lima 04:13, 29 September 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] Good article? Too many footnotes
I came to this article looking for information on Holy Ghost fathers and possibly an info box if such existed. The amount of footnotes in this article is ludicrous and distracting. To be honest, I skimmed and did not bother reading the article.--Buckboard 09:39, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
- I agree with Buckboard that a certain editor's multiple demands for sources in support of even the most obvious and non-controversial statements was ridiculous and not really conducive to attaining the proclaimed purpose of producing a "good article". Lima 12:25, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
I agree that the presence of a footnote after every statement makes this article very difficult to read. I've not seen any other article treated like this, so I am planning to remove the citations soon. Unless a particular statement is controversial, there is no need to footnote it, and references can easily be included to document the content. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 69.122.71.171 (talk) 21:04, 15 April 2007 (UTC).
- Yes, there a lot of footnotes. But I suggest there are no more footnotes than in any other biography of this controversial figure. Probably less. In a printed biography, the footnotes are generally in the back of the book, where they are out of way (and generally not read). But here they at the bottom of the article, looking serious and confronting. But look, nobody has to read them. If we scrap footnotes, we must scrap text as well. Let's face it, we're talking about the asthetic appearance of the article here. That's secondary to its content.--Gazzster 00:29, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
- It is not particularly common in a scholarly biography to footnote a fact such as where the individual was born. But it is decidedly peculiar as the footnote for this information to quote another webpage word-for-word. Some months ago I wrote a major expansion of this article based on the major published biography (Tissier de Mallerais) and several other works. Subsequently another editor scoured the internet to find webpages which stated these same things. He then cited these webpages as the "source" of these facts. This just isn't the way scholarship works. The problem is not just the quantity of footnotes, but the quality and format of them. Noel S McFerran 12:57, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
Excellent article, excellent sourcing. "Too many footnotes" sounds like a joke to me. Stammer 20:48, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
I don't know. It doesn't read NPOV....seemed rather biased in favour of Lefebvre. However, I'll leave it to wiser & better editors than myself to address it —Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.58.120.11 (talk) 02:29, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Introduction
My already stated view is that the introduction to a Wikipedia article may indicate what points of controversy will be discussed in the article, but that the actual discussion(s) should take place in the body of the article. In fact, much of what was in the introduction was only a duplication of what was discussed again later. Smith2006 wants the introduction to be changed back. I do not, at this point, think I need to explain my position further. Please express your opinions. I will abide by whatever fellow-editors decide. Lima 19:17, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
- I concur that the introductory paragraph should be brief and merely summarize things, leaving discussion for later in the article. I do think that it would be reasonable to mention the (disputed) excommunication in the introduction, perhaps "In 1988, the Holy See declared Lefebvre automatically excommunicated for consecrating four bishops in violation of canon law, a decision disputed by his supporters". Noel S McFerran 22:59, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
- I reverted it. I will concede a short introduction, if the information provided in the present summarizing introduction is relocated into the body of the article. It cannot be deleted, as it contains important statements e.g. on Lefebvre supporting religious tolerance, and specific things he opposed (e.g. communion into the hand). And also, the excommunication is not merely disputed by "his supporters". That is a claim not corresponding to reality, given the fact that many others have done so too. I am opposed to such biased statements, as if only his supporters alleged this. Also deletion of work of others in the introduction is highly ungrateful and uncharitable, especially given the fact only Lima deleted it, not other contributors. Please stay reasonable. One could remove the introduction also to below, as a summary.Smith2006 12:32, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
- I hoped Smith would give a more substantial reason for his reversal. If he thinks something important has been omitted that is not duplicated outside the introduction - personally, I don't think there is - why does he not put it in some suitable place or places outside the introduction, even in a completely new section? If he shows this is necessary or useful, he is certainly free to do so. The rest of us are also quite open to considering his concrete observations, such as the one about the mention of "his (Lefebvre's) supporters" (a mention that, however, departs from truth by gratuitously adding "merely"). That the Holy See "declared him automatically excommunicated" is an objective, easily verifiable, fact. I accepted McFerran's view that this fact should be mentioned. But if Smith is satisfied with omitting this question from the introduction and leaving it until later in the article, I will give my support to Smith instead of to McFerran. Lima 14:37, 29 April 2007 (UTC)