Talk:Magnesium transporters
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[edit] To correct the style?
This article tells for example: "Most of the published literature on the CorA gene comes from the laboratory of M. E. Maguire. Recently the group of R. J. Schweyen", and so on. Such style could be fine for a scientific review, but this is an Encyclopedia article. The article probably needs to be "compacted", and names of scientists mostly removed (there are references anyway). Otherwise, this is difficult to read - too many secondary details. Any objections?Biophys 00:29, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
Sure, correct as you see fit. This section is from my PhD thesis with limited editing. The thesis itself is now online at the university library so editing this won't lose data. Actually some of this stuff is starting to get out of date, but I no longer work on Magnesium so I have limited ability to add new information.Reveldrummond 06:58, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
