Talk:Louann Brizendine

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Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

• Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
• Basic biographical information required, including date and place of birth
• Lead needs slimming and material moving to main article
• 'Education' and Faculty appointments sections need to be rewritten in prose
• Information on work, writings and research should be expanded
• Section on 'Criticisms' should be expanded to present a balanced picture of The Female Brain, possibly drawing from the existing article
• References should be expanded
• External links present which could be used to expand article

Espresso Addict 09:01, 19 July 2007 (UTC)