Talk:Lip plumper
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[edit] Poor quality
This article reads, at the moment, too much like an advertisement for lip plumpers. Several times it emphasises the "benefits" of these products, going so far as to actually use the words "health-enhancing product". Also, it doesn't exactly explain how the said products work, or give examples of possible ingredients. The tone is far from encyclopaedic. Shadowcrow 03:17, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
In fact, considering the unencyclopaedic tone and overall quality, I'm putting up the Wikipedia: Cleanup image. Shadowcrow 02:39, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
