Talk:Liam Miller/GA
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[edit] GA review
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- There tends to be a lot of "he", try to even out he and Miller in the background section. Also, is the information about Manutdzone describing Miller important to the article? It would be best to add the commentary views from Martin O'Neill and Miller into an incline citation to ref. number 10. - I think the information describing Miller is important to the article as it shows what type of player he is. Alright then, it should stay. I don't really understand about the inline citation part, can you expand on it please? What I meant was remove the commentary views and add them to the ref, example: see here. - I have tried with the inline citation, can you look to make sure I did it correctly. It looks fine, good job. - And User:Xavexgoem has copyedited it.
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- Is there a source available for his contract negotiations with Celtic falling through? Also, is there a source available for Miller being suspended in a game against Switzerland? - I have removed the info for the negotiations falling through and I have cited using another previously used source.
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- On the Manchester United paragraph, this sentence ----> "This caused an outcry amongst the Celtic support, who perceived Miller to be showing a distinct lack of loyalty to the club, which had supported him through long-term injury." sounds like a POV. That's all me; correct me if I'm wrong, please. In the second paragraph for Manchester United, "fairly promising start" sounds like POV. In the same section, Manchester United should not be linked more than once, per here. In the international section, this sentence ----> "He was bizarrely played in a game", makes no sense; what is it trying to say? If it can be explained, please do so explain it well. - I have used a quote for this, removed the POV and overlinked Manchester United.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article! Also, contact me if the above statements are answered.
- Pass or Fail:
