User:Lex Rex

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hi, User:Lex Rex,

you have done a good copy paste job of the office memo of 1993. the article needs it but, i find it very "reader unfriendly"..i mean a lot of legal jargon there..i am requesting you to minimise the words used by atleast one third to one half , so that everyone reads an "understandable crisp version" of the office memo..i hope you can chip in with editing the text to a concise format. i tried to do the first two para..but didnt want to go further as i thought i shall do it if you are unable/ unwilling to downsize the text..(i also suggest we leave a seperate link to the source of copy paste job..)Cityvalyu (talk) 22:03, 13 April 2008 (UTC)