Talk:Leo J. Ryan Federal Building

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Good article Leo J. Ryan Federal Building was one of the good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
An entry from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know? column on March 3, 2007.

[edit] Review note

Review — This article is currently being reviewed (additional comments are welcome).Trishm 11:54, 27 May 2007 (UTC) I have passed this article as it appears to meet the Good Article criteria. Nice job. Further improvements would be polishing the prose to 'sparkling' - adding details and using phrases that allow you to visualise or otherwise become connected to the building. A peer review may be the next step.

Well done! Trishm 12:15, 29 May 2007 (UTC)

  • Thank you so much! I will work on the prose, and then after that is done post for a Peer Review. Smee 12:32, 29 May 2007 (UTC).

[edit] Delilsted

Sorry guys - I've reviewed this at WP:ARCHPR I'm delisting on the grounds it's not broad enough in it's coverage of the building itself (3a). --Mcginnly | Natter 09:45, 22 June 2007 (UTC)

  • That is most unfortunate. (2) other editors took a look at this article and both thought it was GA material. Both the GA reviewer and the other editor that commented at the Peer Review. Please reconsider. Smee 19:43, 22 June 2007 (UTC).
  • I agree with Mcginnly, it is a decent article, but it simply doesn't have sufficient coverage of the building. Perhaps some more information as was suggested in the Peer Review would be beneficial. Lsi john 21:04, 22 June 2007 (UTC)