Talk:Lead and copper rule
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[edit] Lead
The lead section is too long, it shouldn't contain any info not found in the body of the text per WP:LEAD. Use the intro to basically summarize the article's content. I am sure this can be easily addressed by the main author here with some text moving a quick introduction rewrite. This is the reason I tagged the article. IvoShandor 09:35, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
- Looks okay, the lead is probably still a bit long, maybe just one paragraph needed for an article this size but it's much better. :-) IvoShandor 12:55, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
- I moved the second paragraph over to one of the sections, seeing as it was able to be done. (By the way, beautiful job on the copyedit). MessedRocker (talk) 19:34, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
- Looks like that was Andplus, nice work on the lead and restructuring, and the article, btw. IvoShandor 14:05, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
- I moved the second paragraph over to one of the sections, seeing as it was able to be done. (By the way, beautiful job on the copyedit). MessedRocker (talk) 19:34, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
