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[edit] SAI - Small Arms Industries Aps

A tag has been placed on SAI - Small Arms Industries Aps, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under the criteria for speedy deletion, because the article seems to be blatant advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become an encyclopedia article. Please read the general criteria for speedy deletion, particularly item 11, as well as the guidelines on spam.

If you can indicate why the subject of this article is not blatant advertising, you may contest the tagging. To do this, please add {{hangon}} on the top of the article and leave a note on the article's talk page explaining your position. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag yourself, but don't hesitate to add information to the article that would help make it encyclopedic, as well as adding any citations from reliable sources to ensure that the article will be verifiable. Feel free to leave a note on my talk page if you have any questions about this.

Please stop. If you continue to blank out or delete portions of page content, templates or other materials from Wikipedia, you will be blocked from editing.

Also, this page was already speedy deleted today. Thanks. Peasantwarrior (talk) 13:22, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

HOW DO I communicate with you ... ??? I am new to this ....

I wrote it based on the formed used by others .... seach for 'Surefire' .... mine is just like that ??

Can you assist me with editing the page ????? What is wrong .... I dont feel I have written some thing wrong or in a many other companies are also writing

You can ask me anything you want on my talk page. What you are doing is considered (by me, at least) advertising. Your only reference is that companies web-site. If you want, you can explain your case (that you are not advertising) on Talk:SAI_-_Small_Arms_Industries_Aps. As you can see on Surefire article talk page, the article also had to be edited in order to remove advertising. Thanks. Peasantwarrior (talk) 13:36, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

OK ... I´ll work on adding more general info and links to other suppressor manufacturers  !!

Do I "just" ad the new information the 'normal way'? ... and yes - i now realise not to copy paste from my word doc... which will delite the dispute notice (a understand this is 'not good' but I did'nt know that would happen when I tried changing the article) ...

Yes, you do. May I direct you here: Wikipedia:Welcome. Here, you'll find all you need for a writing of a good article. Also, sorry... the article in question has (yet) not been deleted. Peasantwarrior (talk) 13:44, 28 December 2007 (UTC)Peasantwarrior (talk) 13:45, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

Hey .. please revise article again ... any specific alterations you desire ?

I am not an administrator and my saying isn't final. Obviously, admin(s) have given you some time to edit the article into a correct form. You may find a more experienced user here Wikipedia:New_contributors'_help_page. Peasantwarrior (talk) 14:29, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

What is wrong with the form? .....

Sorry, not the form, the article text itself. It is a bit biased and somewhat incoherent (in my mind). Again, I said, I am not an administrator and my saying on this isn't final. I'm sure people at Wikipedia:New_contributors'_help_page will be most helpful. Peasantwarrior (talk) 14:38, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

Also, the text itself seems more to be about supressors than about the company itself. You can't expect me to watch your talk page this often. If you have any further questions, please, ask at my talk page or, even better, ask the people at the New contributors' help page. Peasantwarrior (talk) 14:41, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

.. (I try again ... something happend when writing a answer) Hmmm I keep changing text ...... Do'nt know what more the alter/erase ... (the page you refer me to is not helping me, sorry) I take it that we are talking biased on a general scale... I'm not doing any appraisals... not stating that other brands are not good... I DO link to the best of my compeditors..... I honestly don't feel the article differs from other articles on other companies on wikipedia ????

First of all, you didn't even ask a question at Wikipedia:New_contributors'_help_page. So, how do you know it's not helping you? Be bold and ask a question there. Also, this sentence you wrote "I DO link to the best of my compeditors....." concerns me because of this: Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest. It seems you are somehow connected to this Small Arms Industries ApS. In that case, you probably shouldn't write about them. Thanks. Peasantwarrior (talk) 15:04, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

Also, the page we're talking about got deleted - meaning admin(s) decided it was advertisment after all. Peasantwarrior (talk) 15:06, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

OK ... Please look at the surefire page again .... I realize that I can't put a quote by Jimmy Wales on a page about SAI ... or advetize my prices that way .... The surefire page is writen by surefire themselves !!! Bad feelings ... yes a little .. as I keep stating...I don't see the difference in content compare to other article.. I think it got erase in the first case do to the fact that the page only had a company logo - and nothing else - no text or anything ... when it got erased ... because it is the first time I have put an article on wikipedia ... ... as I said I think this is why it got erased please ask the person who did the erasing !!! .... then I put the article on 15/20 min later not realizing the problem with the logo file ... and thus erasing/overwriting the first erase notice...... ... Not asking a question on the page you refer to ... again I'm sorry... but I since you are the one not feeling "right" about the article ... it seems that asking you my questions is the best thing to do......

Please talk to the admin again !!!!

Again, I am not an admin. I did not talk to the admin. You can talk to him/them if you like. I have no contact with admins whatsoever. If you have a problem with the surefire article, write that on the article's talk page, ask for the article to be deleted (Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion) or ask for it to be speedy deleted (WP:CSD). Also, check this out: Wikipedia:OSE Thanks. Peasantwarrior. (talk) 15:29, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

OK .. Question has been asked (copy below)

...... First time article problems...

Hi all.

I need help or comments regarding an article on SAI - Small Arms Industries ApS.

It originally got erased (I think due to image posting error ... only a company logo was visible for 20min .. sorry but it's my first article).. then I altered it a few times... but still it isn't good eneugh acording to an editor (Peasantwarrior)

He/She has ask me to go here for help /directions.

My basic question is .."what's so wrong with the article"?

.... once you have commented the SAI article ... then read the article on "surefire" ..... that is OK? (YES, I can't cite Jimmy Wales ... And he don't know prices of SAI products ...I think... but I belive it shouldn't matter!!)

I don't know what more to do ... what to change ... or where to state my frustrations !

Please help / Advise Lapsai (talk) 15:46, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

Retrieved from "http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:New_contributors%27_help_page"

But how can I ask questions about the page when it has been erased again ??????? Then I can get the needed help ??