Talk:Lakeland High School (White Lake Township, Michigan)
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Can someone find out the years for the 5 state titles won? We can add a State titles subsection to the athletics section to make the article longer and more complete. --D 17:03, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
Most of the facts in this page need verification. Some sections show signs of bias. --D 17:05, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Serious cleanup needed
This article needs severe clean-up. The Future Problem Solving and Marching Eagles sections can be condensed, obviously - rather than have sections on the FPS team and the Marching band, I think it would be better to have a section for "Academic Distinctions and Awards" for the distinctions in FPS, music, and other non-athletic areas that Lakeland has won, and a separate section called "Extracurricular activities" detailing what FPS and the bands do in addition to other activities that are offered at Lakeland High School.
Also, improvement can be made on the International Academy section - the phrase "the International Academy West came to Lakeland High School" is incorrect since the IA West is not really a division of Lakeland (as that phrase implies), but a completely separate institution which just happens to share the same building.
It seems primarily that this article has been added to by LHS students who simply want to make their school look better - hence why I tagged it for "peacock terms." I also deleted the LHS Football section since it was beyond help in terms of grammar/style and also because there is already an athletics section; readers of this article only need to know the championships the football team has won and their most recent season records, not a play-by-play of every game. The article has been tagged for grammar and needs some serious grammar and style editing. Beggarsbanquet (talk) 04:30, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
