Talk:Lake (band)

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"Consequently the label released previously unavailable live material from stage appearances between May 1999 and October 1980"

I assume that the writer meant 1979 rather than 1999, but because I am unfamiliar with the material I am reluctant to correct it blindly. Beeeej 13:26, 9 August 2007 (UTC)

I fixed it, along with reorganizing the personnel section to highlight the lineup of the band during their peak period. Much of the article could use some rework to make it more encyclopedic and remove some of the POV and weasel words. It could use some references and verification, and where necessary, correction (for instance, while at least one song of theirs, Time Bomb, did make it into the Billboard Hot 100, it never made it as high as the Top 40, much less #13 as the current article text indicates). The personnel section needs to be updated to reflect the lineup from the group's most recent reformation. --Mwalimu59 16:31, 9 August 2007 (UTC)