Talk:Kyushindo

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Start This article has been rated as Start-Class on the quality scale.

Article is borderline B-class. A few more inline references, a picutre. I also removed one external link. Associations are fine but club links should be avoided.Peter Rehse 00:07, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Introduction

I agree that the TOC was dropping too far down, but the article now needs a good introduction. —Leo Laursen ( T | C ) 14:58, 16 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] NPOV

Despite being the person that originally wrote much of the content, it has come to my attention that I may have falled into an NPOV issue. Whilst researching this and my Kenshiro Abbe article I have come across sources that dispute the link between George Mayo and Kyushindo. I am continuing to research this and have also invited some other martial artists to be come involved to try to resolve the issue. This is just a spot for some discussion about the NPOV of the article. Corky1979 (talk) 10:54, 2 March 2008 (UTC)