Talk:Kirup, Western Australia
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
 |
Kirup, Western Australia is within the scope of WikiProject Australia, which aims to improve Wikipedia's coverage of Australia and Australia-related topics. If you would like to participate, visit the project page. | ||
| Stub | This article has been rated as Stub-class on the quality scale. | ||
| Low | This article has been rated as Low-importance on the importance scale. | ||
 |
This article is supported by WikiProject Australian places. | ||
 |
This article is supported by WikiProject Western Australia. | ||
|
Assessment comments
|
|||
The obvious advertising for pies (admittedly very good pies) is non-NPOV, inappropriate, recent, and should be reverted. Callophylla 09:29, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] pies
this definately advertising with questionable POV, I've move here if a source can by cited then it could be put back into the article Gnangarra 09:37, 23 October 2006 (UTC) the section
The Kirup deli is rather proud of its "famous homemade pies". The pies are from an old recipe handed down through the young family for 5 generations. They are known throughout the district as being the greatest pies in all of Australia. Mr Geoff Young re-introduced the recipe 15 years ago to re-establish the recipe within the general public. All the pies are hand made and all have real meat and gravy. They are an outstanding part of the Kirup landscape.
I thought my original statement 'The Kirup deli is rather proud of its "famous homemade pies"' was neutral enough, but yeah, the expansion got a bit advertisey. JAW 16:06, 25 October 2006 (UTC)
- The wording should be "Kirup deli is famous for its homemade pie", then that still needs references see WP:CITE the source needs to be from a 3rd party. Gnangarra 00:21, 26 October 2006 (UTC)
- Also what about the Kirup Syrup Gnangarra
- Dunsborough has a similar problem with bakery item too SatuSuro 12:22, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
