Talk:Khoda

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[edit] POV dispute

The article currently sounds too much like an advertisement, brief though it is; particularly NPOV statements include "Khoda members hold characteristics of leadership, humility, and a responsibility to the betterment of Stevens as a whole as well as to the student community", "important issues," and "assures that there is a unified effort." Undoubtedly, including information from another source would help balance the article. Tjarrett (talk) 03:18, 17 May 2008 (UTC)

"(N)POV" is not the correct term for what you are pointing out. Those examples are grandstanding, and the appropriate tag would have been {{unencyclopedic}} or {{tone}}. Also, hyperbole can't be balanced by "including information from another source." It can only be removed. So... just do it. :) -- Fullstop (talk) 17:39, 18 May 2008 (UTC)