Talk:Keith Butler

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[edit] NPOV

the first paragraph of the article almost sounds like a hagiography or commercial for his religious person/church. -- fdewaele, 18 August 2006, 10:55 (CET).

Full disclosure: I am an active member and department leader in one of Bishop's Satelite churches, Brandon Florida. Though there is plenty of room to expand, and have the "controversy" section added to in a neutral POV, the first paragraph is fully non POV. It reads like the beginning of most biographies I have ever read. --TecBrat 22:57, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

It was with the now long removed following paragraph I had problems with:

His services to people is by his true God-given gift preaching and serving the community. His line-upon-line, precept-upon-precept teaching on the word of God allows his messages to spread and go global, which is in the emphasis on the notoriety of (WOFICC) establishing satellite churches across the country and world...

now that was hardly neutral or written in a style appropriate for a encyclopedia methinks.

You are right though that there still is plenty of room for expanding and improving the article both with regards to content, grammar and visualisation.-- fdewaele, 8 November 2006, 11:40

I saw that after a while. Can we take off the neutrality dispute banner?

--TecBrat 19:03, 8 November 2006 (UTC)