Talk:Karl Michael Ziehrer
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[edit] Confusing Language
In the second paragraph, we find the end of a sentence: "that the two men could not agree upon and has since parted in high enmity." Should this be re-worded? What exactly is this second paragraph trying to say? In the seventh paragraph, another: "which oddly-enough among them his personal appearance as well". Smyslov 18:25, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- It looks like a translation - in need of a rewrite! Would you like to have a go? --Kleinzach 00:43, 21 April 2007 (UTC)