Talk:Karan Johar/Comments
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This is a very promising article. The content that is already here is of a very high quality. However, there is a lot of room for improvements. What I found particularly lacking in this article, and what could be improved are:
- Lack of references, except for a handful of them. More are needed.
- The Career section haphazardly lists all his roles (Director, Actor, Designer, Talk Show Host, Judge etc). The section should be broken into subsections, with each talking about a particular. I do not think breaking on basis of timeline would be a good idea for this article.
- A Trivia section sounds fan site-ish. The info in that section should be somehow merged into the content of the article.
- More detailed prose should be provided about his work. It should also focus a bit more on the market reception, critical recepion and nox-office reception of his films. A separate section for Critic's Response (or Critical Response) may be added.
- If possible, a Personal Life section be created (fully attributed, no rumors).
- A source for Khan (the movie, should be provided).
- Phrases like big hit should be backed by a ref and if possible a sales figure.
Wish the article all the best. --soumসৌমোyasch 09:33, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
