Talk:Kamrun
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[edit] Fan site correction
I have rewritten this article to correct the grammar, as well as to remove certain weasel words such as "well-known", "iconic and groundbreaking", "most famous", and "hunk", (among others) all which led the article to read a bit like a fan page.
Please note that the references are not from a highly reputed source and I have made the following corrections rather than subject this article to a nomination for complete removal due to a lack of verifiable information.
Also note that there is no wikipedia requirement that changes be discussed on the article talk page or in the sandbox prior to their inclusion. Thank you! 207.237.233.51 (talk) 03:56, 30 April 2008 (UTC)