Talk:Jyu Oh Sei
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[edit] Too much story detail
What the heck is up with this article? The entire story is revealed, there's horrendous spoilers in the character descriptions alone. This stuff is to give a taste of what you learn in the first couple episodes and should not include massive, "shocker" plot points. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.10.160.73 (talk) 06:13, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
[edit] More
I'm shocked at the poor writing in this article. For starters, there should be a massive spoiler warning before the character descriptions. Long-winded plot summaries don't belong here. These details are not only unnecessary but undesirable in this context.
"Thor . . ., defeated the Top of Ochre Ring to became the leader of Ochre ring himself. After a few years, Thor becomes the Beast King and finds out the truth behind the myth of the Beast King. Thor fell in love with Karim, though he was aware of Tiz’s feelings for him. In the end, Thor accepted Tiz’s feelings and agreed to let Tiz bear his child after he saves Chimera."
"As a result, Rai was killed by a carnivorous plant."
"She understood that Zagi was an important person to Thor and protected him with her life when a Night Ring member tried to kill Zagi for revenge."
"Third helped Thor to become the Top of Ochre Ring" "Thor became the Beast King, it was revealed that Third was actually Lt. Sigurd Heiza" "Third’s desire was to go to Earth, but later found out that Earth had been destroyed by a meteor" (is this what you'd call an earthshattering spoiler?)
"When Karim was murdered, Thor thought that Zagi was the one who killed her and challenged him to a fight, where Zagi was defeated."
"When she was murdered by a mysterious killer, Thor thought that it was Zagi who killed her.
"Cheng became handicapped later in the story" "Sun Ring’s Top loved Cheng and protected her when she was about to be killed by Zagi."
Past this, there's an episode guide, which appears to filter out all those 'unnecessary bits' and just get straight to giving away every major plot point in a concise fashion. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.10.160.73 (talk) 06:29, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Jyu-oh-sei.JPG
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BetacommandBot (talk) 17:11, 2 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Article largely rewritten
I finished rewriting this article a while ago, removing erroneous or unnecessary information as well as spoilers. Please keep an eye on the page, as major spoilers keep on being added by someone. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.10.139.158 (talk) 23:21, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
