Talk:Julia Neigel

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The original version of this article is very hard to understand for native speakers of English. I copyedited the article, but another editor keeps reverting it to the original form. There are also issues with POV language and non-notable info. Additionally, the entire article is unsourced. janejellyroll 04:45, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

hey janejellyroll

why do you delete the article? whats wrong?

I'm not deleting the article. I'm trying to work with you to create a better article. First, there are many copyediting issues in the original article. I attempted to smooth it out so that the article represented Standard English. Secondly, I removed language that we call POV (for point of view) at Wikipedia. For more info on this, please look at WP:NPOV. I think that this could be a great article. We just have to bring it in line with Wikipedia guidelines. Let's work together to do this. Please let me know if you have any questions. Again, I do not want to delete this article and that's not at all what I'm trying to do. janejellyroll 04:56, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

The article has some serious npov issues and I've tagged it as such. MidgleyDJ 06:43, 20 January 2007 (UTC)