User talk:JT Dutch

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[edit] Miracle on Manchester

Hi...I was wondering if you could go over your work on the Miracle on Manchester article? No offense intended, but it is written in a style that isn't really appropriate for Wikipedia, which is an encyclopedia, not a magazine or similar publicaiton. There is a good deal of colorful language that reads great on the daily sports page or in a copy of Sports Illustrated, but not in an encyclopedia. For other problems with the article, most notably, the fact that it is entirely unreferenced and lacks citations, please see the article's talk page. Thanks! Gmatsuda 09:27, 3 September 2007 (UTC)