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Review of May 3/4 edits to Jeremiah Wright sermon controversy:

  • 16:24, May 3: [1] Ewenss removes critics paragraph from "Comparisons with other candidates"
  • 16:36, May 3: [2] Trilemma restores paragraph. Trilemma reversion #1.
  • 16:55–17:09, May 3: [3] Happyme22 makes a number of small edits, adjusting wording and condensing some quotations.
  • 17:12, May 3: [4] Ewenss removes critics paragraph again. Ewenss reversion #1.
    • 17:16, May 3: [5] Ewenss reverts Happyme22's edits; consecutive edit with previous, hence does not count as a revert.
  • 17:16, May 3: [6] Happyme22 restores critics paragraph. Happyme22 reversion #1.
    • 17:17, May 3: [7] Happyme22 restores his edits; consecutive edit with previous.
  • 17:19, May 3: [8] CyberAnth reverts Happyme22. CyberAnth reversion #1.
  • 17:20, May 3: [9] Happyme22 reverts CyberAnth. Happyme22 reversion #2.
  • 17:24, May 3: [10] Trilemma changes "noted that" to "contended that".
  • 17:25, May 3: [11] CyberAnth reverts Happyme22. CyberAnth reversion #2.
  • 17:25–17:52, May 3: [12] Ewenss adds material from Eugene Rivers.
  • 17:52–17:58, May 3: [13] I change wording about academic discussion and tweak the heading levels.
  • 18:00, May 3: [14] Ewenss adjusts a citation.
  • 18:00, May 3: [15] I change "explained" to "argued" in the Martin Marty paragraph.
  • 18:03, May 3: [16] I change "revealed, however" to "stated" in the sentence about what Obama says he heard when.
  • 18:04, May 3: [17] Ewenss reverts "argued" to "explained". Ewenss reversion #2.
  • 18:10, May 3: [18] Ewenss adds a citation and removes opinion of Steve Adubato.
  • 18:16, May 3: [19] Trilemma removes Eugene Rivers material. Trilemma reversion #2.
  • 19:11, May 3: [20] CyberAnth restores Eugene Rivers material. CyberAnth reversion #3.
  • 19:13, May 3: [21] Trilemma removes Eugene Rivers material again. Trilemma reversion #3.
  • 20:59, May 3: [22] Reddogg adds Robert Parry/ Sun Myung Moon material.
  • 00:07, May 4: [23] Cryptographic hash restores Eugene Rivers material. Cryptographic hash reversion #1.
  • 00:20, May 4: [24] Theslb removes a detail from the lead section.
  • 00:31, May 4: [25] Trilemma removes Eugene Rivers material again. Trilemma reversion #4.
    • 00:33–00:34, May 4: [26] Trilemma moves "Competing candidates" section.
  • 00:39, May 4: [27] Theslb adjusts the wording in the "U.S. foreign policy" section.
  • 01:14, May 4: [28] Cryptographic hash restores Eugene Rivers material. Cryptographic hash reversion #2.
  • 01:24, May 4: [29] Theslb adjusts wording in intro.
  • 02:04, May 4: [31] Trilemma reverts Theslb's HIV adjustment. Trilemma reversion #5.
    • 02:05, May 4: [32] Trilemma removes Eugene Rivers material again; consecutive with previous.
  • 02:43, May 4: [33] Ewenss restores Eugene Rivers material again: Ewenss reversion #3.
  • 02:44, May 4: [34] Trilemma removes Eugene Rivers material again: Trilemma reversion #6.
    • 02:46, May 4: [35] Trilemma moves "Commentary on media" section.
  • 02:47, May 4: [36] Ewenss removes critics paragraph again. Ewenss reversion #4.
  • 02:53, May 4: [37] Trilemma restores critics paragraph. Trilemma reversion #7.
    • 02:56, May 4: [38] Trilemma adds material from Victor Davis Hansen.
    • 02:59, May 4: [39] Trilemma adjusts headings.
  • 03:03, May 4: [40] Ewenss removes critics paragraph and adds material about Hillary Clinton and the Fellowship. Ewenss reversion #5.
  • 03:05, May 4: [41] Trilemma adds material about Wright's comments comparing US Marines to the Roman legionaries who tortured Christ.
    • 03:08, May 4: [42] Trilemma restores critics paragraph again. Trilemma reversion #8.
  • 03:12, May 4: [43] CyberAnth restores critics paragraph and Eugene Rivers material. CyberAnth reversion #4
  • 03:23, May 4: [44] Trilemma removes Eugene Rivers material again. Trilemma reversion #9.
    • 03:24, May 4: [45] Trilemma removes Obama's comment that "the man I saw yesterday was not the man I met 20 years ago... "
  • 03:26, May 4: [46] Theslb restores Obama comment and Eugene Rivers material. Theslb reversion #1.
    • 03:28, May 4: [47] Theslb restores his earlier edits of HIV paragraph. Consecutive with previous.
  • 03:30, May 4: [48] Trilemma reverts Theslb's HIV paragraph edit again. Trilemma reversion #10.
  • 04:04–05:21, May 4: [49] Ewenss makes a number of edits, including more material on The Fellowship and commentary from Frank Schaeffer.
  • 05:25, May 4: [50] Theslb restores HIV wording. Theslb reversion #2.
  • 05:33-05:49, May 4: [51] Ewenss makes a number of edits, including the addition of material on Rod Parsley and the change of "Commentary on media" section header to "Criticism of media coverage".
  • 05:51, May 4: [52] Happyme22 changes "Criticism of media coverage" to "Media coverage".
  • 05:52–05:44, May 4: [53] Ewenss removes Victor Davis Hansen material and changes "Media coverage" to "Critical commentary of media coverage. Ewenss reversion #6.
  • 05:59–06:20, May 4: [54] Andyvphil adjusts a quotation and adds a citation.
  • 06:31–06:45, May 4: [55] Ewenss adds more material on Hillary Clinton and adjusts a header level.
  • 06:46, May 4: [56] Andyvphil changes "speculated" to "asserted" in the section on Wright's NAACP remarks.
  • 06:47–06:58, May 4: [57] Ewenss makes a few textual adjustments.