Talk:Joseph Chalier
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[edit] Copy-edit/Re-write
I copy-edited the article and removed the notice. Still, though the copy is now clean, this article needs to be re-written by someone knowledgable with the French Revolution. I don't understand exactly how "the Convention" plays a role in this article (it is never properly introduced), nor does one get the scope of the Jacobin's control in Lyons at the time of Chalier's arrest. There are several other things I find questionable as well. Zachkchk 11:37, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
