Talk:José Juan Barea

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Article milestones Date Process Result August 3, 2007 Good article nominee Not listed September 22, 2007 Good article nominee Listed Current Status: Good article

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[edit] GA nomination

Ok I am nominating this to WP:GAC again, it appears the main concerns in the last review has been taken care of, Chensiyuan helped me with the text cleanup and the unsourced image is gone. To the reviewer please note that this article is lacking an image because no public domain image has appeared so far, I have tried to find one and failed and a petition on the NBA WikiProject hasn't produced any results. - Caribbean~H.Q. 02:38, 22 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] NOtes

Problems with the article

• Some very short sentences, which need to be smoothed out. Some read like dot points and are dot points without the dot so to speak.
• Prose: There are many places where a comma is appropriate but is not given at all.
• Some paragraphs do not appear to be fully cources and could do with some tying up

Blnguyen (bananabucket) 03:59, 2 October 2007 (UTC)

I will work with these points tommorow morning when I can edit with a fresh head, thanks for the review. - Caribbean~H.Q. 04:09, 2 October 2007 (UTC)

Ok I have added a few commas here and there, however I need a few examples of the sentences that you are talking about, can you list the paragraph's that you think aren't fully sourced? I think that any controversial or doubtable statement has been covered by one of the references presented, a list of the sentences and paragraphs in need of work can be very useful. - Caribbean~H.Q. 22:45, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

Um, just picking a paragraph at random and checking the sources, the international section. The first ref is broken and the second doesn't say what the accomopanying sentence does say. I have done a copyedit for you. Can you also source the infobox please? Blnguyen (bananabucket) 05:49, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for the copyedit, that has always been my Achilles' heel as a editor. About the references, I added a funtional link for the first one and replaced the second one with the Miami Tropics' official site reference. - Caribbean~H.Q. 06:19, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

The fields in the infobox have been referenced using his NBA profile. - Caribbean~H.Q. 06:33, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

Ok, I passed this article. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 04:47, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for the review again. - Caribbean~H.Q. 04:57, 10 October 2007 (UTC)