Talk:Jonathan Mann
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[edit] Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:
- Appropriate infobox should be added
- Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
- Some copy editing needed for style and grammar
- Basic biographical information required, eg place of birth, education, career prior to joining WHO
- Lead should be expanded to survey other aspects of his life
- Article would benefit from further division into appropriate subheadings
- References should preferably be converted to inline format using the reflist template, to prevent the need for manual renumbering
- External links to useful online resources should be added if available
Espresso Addict 21:35, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
