Talk:Jonathan Bush

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I have cleaned up the massive stylistic problems in the article, but its substantive content needs a thorough overhaul. For example, the allegation about Princess Haifa sending funds to 9/11 hijackers has been found to be untrue after investigation. Therefore the article's flat statement to the contrary needs removal as being utterly irrelevant to the article's stated subject.

Other elements in the article constitute innuendo, such as the assertion that a brother of Osama bin Laden was involved with George W. Bush's early oil ventures, and the (proven false) assertion mentioned above that Riggs Bank was used to send funds to the hijackers. The article author does not come out and state what he is implying (something like Bush somehow conspiring with bin Laden to cause 9/11). Nor does he provide relevant context, such as the highly controversial and POV sources he uses, and the fact that bin Laden has dozens of siblings and that his family disowned him.

I will therefore either extensively re-write this article, or simply wipe it clean as being beyond saving and replace it with a stub for purposes of starting over, soon. LeoO3 05:16, 22 May 2005 (UTC)