Talk:Johnny Kim

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[edit] Tone/wording of article

The style of the article doesn't seem to me to be formal enough for an encyclopedia article. For example, the section "For Johnny Kim, acting and music was not enough. He believes in creating one's own destiny, and in simple, hard work and long hours." sounds more like a fanpage or essay on him. Furthermore, the endnote of "(Bio written by Debra Triplett - Debra@debratriplett.com)" should definitely be removed. Iotha 02:37, 14 January 2007 (UTC)