Talk:John Sheard

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[edit] Re-wording, please

"Sheard's recording history has led to over 200 records..." -- surely his recording history is the 200 records. They are not some accidental side effect. They are his career. So a rewording would run something like, "Sheard's recording history of over 200 records...", but then there would be no principal verb. Is there a way to re-word this sentence to give it a better focus? Hughdbrown (talk) 23:42, 2 January 2008 (UTC)