Talk:John Lennon's jukebox

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John Lennon's jukebox was a good article nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these are addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. Reviewed version: August 29, 2006

[edit] Failed "good article" nomination

This article failed good article nomination. This is how the article, as of August 29, 2006, compares against the six good article criteria:

1. Well written?: The introduction is too abrupt. The body consists primarily of lists.

2. Factually accurate?: okay

3. Broad in coverage?: The article needs a section on the history of the jukebox, from when it was created, to when John Lennon owned it, to when it was auctioned off. It also needs a section on the type and features of the jukebox. There also needs to be an explanation of who John Lennon got it from, where, when, and why.

4. Neutral point of view?: okay

5. Article stability? okay

6. Images?: okay

When these issues are addressed, the article can be resubmitted for consideration. Thanks for your work so far. --Ellie041505 14:27, 29 August 2006 (UTC)