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a little note: for almost 60 years Pershing out ranked Washington, till the 70's when congress passed an act stating that no present, past, or future general could out rank Washington, which led to his premotion to G.A.

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According to an urban legend, Pershing ordered rifle rounds to be dipped in pig fat. These rounds would be used on Islamic insurgents in the Philippines, and the corpses would be buried alongside a pig. Whether or not these rumors are true is up for debate, but after Pershing's service, the United States did not experience a guerrilla problem for the next half century.
  • An "urban legend" indeed, told about numerous other military men other than Pershing as well. Without some source, IMO this doesn't belong in the article. -- Infrogmation 23:16, 28 Aug 2004 (UTC)

From another source:

http://urbanlegends.about.com/library/bl_black_jack_pershing.htm

Comments: I consulted Dr. Frank E. Vandiver, professor of history at Texas A&M University and author of "Black Jack: The Life and Times of John J. Pershing," to find out if there's any truth to the above, and he responded via email that in his opinion the story is apocryphal. "I never found any indication that it was true in extensive research on his Moro experiences," he wrote. "This kind of thing would have run completely against his character."

Similarly, I been unable to find any evidence corroborating the claim that Muslims believe that "eating or touching a pig, its meat, its blood, etc., is to be instantly barred from paradise and doomed to hell." It is true that Islamic dietary restrictions, like those of Judaism, forbid the eating or handling of pork because pigs are considered unclean. But according to Raeed Tayeh of the American Muslim Association in North America, the notion that a Muslim would be denied entrance to heaven for touching a pig is "ridiculous." A statement from the Anti-Defamation League characterized the claim as an "offensive caricature of Muslim beliefs."

In other words, it's just an urban myth, though probably we might want to put it on as an Urban Myth Pueblonative 02:29, 11 August 2006 (UTC) Agreed.

On a different subject, wouldn't "Black Jack" still have been a slightly disparaging sobriquet in itself? "Black" didn't come into general usage as a the preferred generic racial term until the 60s - the polite phrase at the time would be "colored", subsequently replaced by "Negro"? Or am I off base here. Ellsworth 12:26, 13 Oct 2004 (UTC)

IMO, "BLack Jack" just has a better ring to it than "Colored Jack" or "Negro Jack." Incidentally, Pershing wasn't the first American general to earn that nickname -- John A. Logan was called that during and after the Civil War, mostly due to his complexion and his grumpy personality. Cranston Lamont 18:05, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Yes, this is a stub

I think this qualifies as a stub. It's pretty short and only talks about his military career- nothing before then is even mentioned. A lot more could be added, I think. So I think it's a stub. What do you all think. Cookiecaper 01:37, 20 Dec 2004 (UTC)

[edit] A lot more has been added!

To the comment above, I just finished a MAJOR expansion of the article. I hope everyone likes it. -Husnock 04:07, 13 July 2005 (UTC)

[edit] In 1919

Rewrote this sentence:

"In 1919, Pershing was commissioned as a full General and led the United States forces to final victory over the Germans"

Hostilities ended in 1918. Ellsworth 20:33, 13 July 2005 (UTC)

I must a mental problem. For some reason, EVERY time I write about WWI, I think it ended in 1919. And I call myself a historian... -Husnock 22:35, 13 July 2005 (UTC)
So? We liked beating up the Germans, so we did it some more. :p--Kross 10:26, July 17, 2005 (UTC)

[edit] 10 years with no promotion?

It took him 10 years to get promoted and later down the road he skips several ranks? That is very odd and should be discussed in some form in this article. --Ebralph 13:32, 22 July 2005 (UTC)

Its discussed rather well, I think. And back in those days slow promotions were the norm. Most officers held Regular Army rank in the O-2 and O-3 grades for 10-15 years and advanced through brevet commissions. See Regular Army for further details. -Husnock 14:29, 22 July 2005 (UTC)
I don't know, but I didn't feel that it was explained well enough in the article - of course that's my personal impression. Maybe adding a reference to the Regular Army link with a sentence that that was the norm might be a good idea. --Ebralph 15:25, 24 July 2005 (UTC)
Regular Army liks are pretty well scattered throughout the article, including in the Dates of Rank section. Of course, we can add more. -Husnock 15:32, 24 July 2005 (UTC)
Maybe just a sentence saying that it wasn't uncommon might be a good thing. For someone who isn't aware of Regular Army practices of the time might stumble over it like I did without seeing the connection. I just took the Regular Army thing as opposed to the "World War 2" related buildup Army. Of course the issue with the two different ranks are also a stumbling block which I chose to ignore but there again pointing a reader more in that direction might not be amiss. As always unless really, really pointed to one tends to ignore it and it is important for understanding the career of Pershing. --Ebralph 15:40, 25 July 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Clarity of Orders

Somewhere, I've read that one of Pershing's major innovations, during World War I, was a reform of military writing--to make orders shorter, clearer and less ambiguous. Any truth to that? --bamjd3d

[edit] Just a coincidence?

I commute to downtown L.A on the Metro, and the stop I originally was supposed to get off at was Pershing Square. I later found out that Civic Center was much closer to my workplace, but still - was Pershing Squre named after this John J. Pershing, or is it merely coincidental? Hbdragon88 03:54, 12 October 2005 (UTC)

Almost certainly. Before Eisenhower came along, Pershing was held in largely the same regard. Joseph/N328KF (Talk) 14:03, 12 October 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Image:Johnpershing.jpg

Anyone know where one could find a print or high-res version of this item? —Joseph/N328KF (Talk) 03:39, 27 October 2005 (UTC)

[edit] highest rank ever held in the United States military?

A fan of military history, and quickly becoming addicted to Wikipedia, I have come across an apparent disjoint in the information in Wiki; this article states that Pershing attained the "highest rank ever held in the United States military, equivalent only to the posthumous rank of George Washington"

In the article List of U.S. military leaders by rank clearly shows George Dewey as the second-most senior ranking military leader and John J. Pershing as number 3.

If I may draw a parallel argument; George Dewey had the rank of Admiral of the Navy (U.S.), that is, he would be in command of all the fleets of the Navy, outranking a Fleet Admiral (had that rank had existed). His date of rank is 1899, 20 years before Pershing was promoted to General of the Armies of the United States.

Pershing, of course, was General of the Armies, plural, who would evidently outrank a General of the Army, Admiral of the Navy, therefore would be an equivalent rank for Dewey.

Furthermore, Pershing, on his own accord, never wore a rank above 4 stars. Dewey actually wore the rank of Admiral of the Navy.

Finally, Wiki also states:

In the United States Army, the equivalent of Admiral of the Navy is known as General of the Armies.

Thoughts?

Look at this article for correct information on the General of The Army/General of The Armies issue: General of the Army (United States)

SSG Cornelius Seon (Retired) 23:31, 22 February 2006 (UTC)

Dewey and Pershing were the same rank, but the list is by rank and then seniority, and Dewey was senior, being promoted decades before Pershings (that list used to have a numbering system nex to the names) - 06:54, 3 June 2006 (UTC)

Grant, Sherman and Sheridan held the same grade as Pershing. When their grade was established, it was as a revival of the grade created for Washington in 1798. Despite the change in plural (armies) to singluar (army), it is clear it was the same grade. PL 45, which established authority to promote Pershing, also clearly states it was a revival of the earlier grade, despite another switch from singluar to plural. The subsequent WWII grade with the similar title was clearly specified to be lower than that awarded to Grant, Sherman, Sheridan and Pershing. See http://www.tioh.hqda.pentagon.mil/Rank_page/HistoryofGenofArmy.htm —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.20.98.232 (talk) 06:47, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Incoherent sentence fragment removed

I removed the following sentence, which is not only missing a verb, but leaves the reader perplexed.

During the funeral, the most famous riderless horse, Black Jack, named with Pershing's nickname.

Was the horse born during the funeral? Named during the funeral? Unless the article on Black Jack is missing something vital, he was not the horse used during Pershing's funeral. If someone can clarify, please do so. 208.20.251.27 23:26, 7 April 2006 (UTC)

This article seems to be in a strange order. We jump to his "Later Years" then back to his actions in the Mexican Revolution. Shouldn't this article be in chronological order, or am I missing something? Great article however. OrangeMarlin 19:06, 11 April 2006 (UTC)


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[edit] Patton Connection

According to Carlo d'Este's biography of George Patton, the young Patton's career went into high gear at about the time Pershing became romantically involved with Patton's sister. Would this citable item be a bona-fide trivia item for this article, or does it seem too gossipy? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cranston lamont (talk • contribs)

It seems too gossipy with only one source claiming that. However, if there were multiple, independent sources claiming that, then it should be included. --Bark 13:45, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

There are plenty of references to this issue in the two-volume The Patton Papers, much of it in the voice of George Patton himself. However, what really got George in solid with Pershing was Patton's service on the Mexican Border prior to the Punitive Expedition; his performance while with Pershing in the Punitive Expedition; and the gumption he showed to get to go with Pershing to both the Punitive Expedtion AND World War I. The final thing that stood George in good stead was how he jumped at the chance to head the Tank Brigade - when no one else wanted the job. -- SSG Cornelius Seon (Retired) 23:51, 4 July 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Freemasonry

One of the pieces of trivia I know about Pershing is that while a resident of Lincoln, Nebraska he joined a Masonic Lodge (Lincoln Lodge, #19). Given the focus of the article on Pershing's military career, I am unsure of how this fact should be introduced. Is it appropriate for the Trivia section? --User:phkenyon 16:10, 23 Nov 2006 (UTC)

Unfortunately, if that piece of trivia cannot be verified by an independent source, like a biographical book, it should not be included here. Wikipedia has policies of citing sources and no "original research". However, if it can be cited, I would say it's interesting enough to be included wherever it chronologically fits. --Bark 14:21, 24 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Reasons for GA Delisting

This article's GA status has been revoked because it fails criterion 2. b. of 'What is a Good Article?', which states;

(b) the citation of its sources using inline citations is required (this criterion is disputed by editors on Physics and Mathematics pages who have proposed a subject-specific guideline on citation, as well as some other editors — see talk page).

LuciferMorgan 08:45, 5 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Didn't "history" record what a terrible commander he was?

I mean look at his actions in world war one. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 198.145.73.175 (talk) 02:12, 9 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] What's in a name?

I'm inclined to add "(originally "Nigger Jack", for his command of African-American troops)" in the first line, per convention to include all nicknames at the top. Since it's offensive, let me offer the idea for discussion, first (for a change =]). Trekphiler (talk) 16:03, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

I agree, but I think we'd best find a source, the more reliable the better, for this; otherwise people are going to keep reverting it.
On second thought, how long did he have the "Nigger Jack" name? If it was only for a short time, or if it never had wide circulation, then it doesn't belong in the lede. -- Zsero (talk) 16:09, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
Apparently it was during his tenure at West Point, and ample sources are available: http://books.google.com/books?q=%22nigger+jack%22+pershing&btnG=Search+Books&um=1 --Father Goose (talk) 21:56, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
I added '(originally "Nigger Jack", for his command of African-American troops)' with an undeniably reliable source (http://www.nps.gov/pwso/honor/pershing.htm) and an edit summary. It was reverted and I was accused of vandalism by Maxim. I clearly did not edit the article in a 'deliberate attempt to compromise the integrity of Wikipedia', but to add information as directed by the Manual of Style.