Talk:John Dutton Frost
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[edit] WP:MILHIST Assessment
Needs some basic formatting and copyediting just to make it more aesthetically pleasing overall - larger sections, smaller picture, etc. More importantly, introduction needs to be expanded. "John Front was a British airborne officer who served in World War II" at the very least; what makes him notable? What separates him from the pack and makes him interesting? What makes him different from any other RAF Major-General? (the fact that many of them were not in WWII, for starters)LordAmeth 23:53, 7 November 2006 (UTC)