Talk:Johan Oscar Smith

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Assessment comments The following comments were left by the assessors: (edit · refresh) Short lead, stubby sections. The article could be further expanded. Some sections or paragraphs are uncited.--Yannismarou 09:03, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

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I cleaned this article up and would self-rate it as a class B biography. Interested in another assessment.Wikisuperfixer 14:44, 1 January 2007 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't know about these classes. (A link to how the assessment works would have helped.) But the article was IMO in pretty serious need of a NPOV edit and a less devout tone, which I have supplied. It was too much about Smith's Friends, too. Of course Smith's founding of SF was what makes him notable, but the information about the movement in this article still needs to be angled in a biographic way, not lose sight of Smith himself and go off at a tangent about Smith's Friends today. In my immodest opinion, I've made the article a good deal more encyclopedic. Bishonen | talk 21:20, 28 February 2007 (UTC).

P.S. Now I've found the link to the rating project above. Too, too much reading, can't face it, sorry. Bishonen | talk 21:23, 28 February 2007 (UTC).